AP Summer homework strikes another victim! Looks like you came out victorious here.

One typo is in the first panel where King Ballandy says "Now to more importanat matters..."

Anyways, I like how the comic always seems to have some slight variation in the panels even when it's just dialogue. Here's hoping for some increased action and more character development/interaction in the next upcoming comics!

BTW: Thanks for the banner! Looks great!