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    Ettin in the Playground
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    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Needs bigger gutters and paneling that contrasts with the content.
    (Also, in the dark panels (3, 6, 7, 10) it's impossible to make anything out. Adding a back glow as outline for objects might help there.)
    Last edited by Domochevsky; 2011-07-30 at 07:10 PM.
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