Originally Posted by jiriku
This could benefit from spellcheck and a rewrite designed to simplify the sentence structure. The maze of subordinate clauses keeps distracting me from the class features.
For some reason, the pre-edited edition ended up getting posted. Fixed typos and spellcheck. Thanks for catching that.
As for the 'maze of subordinate clauses'... I would submit that it is easier to read than WotC material, and further submit that this isn't a doctoral thesis.
Originally Posted by The Underlord
All hail great Shneekeythulhu! Ia Ia Shneeky fthagn
Quite possibly, the best rebuttal I have ever witnessed.
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