good point, since the toxic fumes attack the body i should include that you will take 2d6 acid damage per hour
What happens if you fail your first save at the River Styx in Avernus. Do you just not get the +2 bonus or should something bad happen?ah, forgot this one too , actually you will be compelled to move towards the river
What happens to you if you fail the Will save when you try to move closer to the river?in the text i stated that should ever your paranoia score equal or exceed your classlevels+other hitdice (like from monsters and the like) you will attack your allies.
What is the effect of paranoia damage? Not everyone has access to The Call of Cthulhu Campaign setting book.true, proofreading is the last step, this is just a test of concept
You really need to edit and proofread this and add breaks between paragraphs.
On my computer i have it in a word format, and have formatted it to taste, when it's done I'll make it into a PDF and e-mail it when asked for it.