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Alright, so, my turn! The beginning of the backstory for my Skeletal minion character Sevet.

The Day I Was Born

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Love it! POOF! Existence!

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Boris Krestyanov
Just Another Day

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*agrees with Magtok*

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Memories - Part 1


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Cliffhanger! Keep going...

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Inherit the Earth, part Two

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Well, that's that. A second part of Sophie's story. I'm not entirely satisfied with it for a variety of reasons, but there you have it.
I suspect you aren't satisfied because it's the exposition phase of the story. If this was a movie, you'd be seeing a quick montage of Sophie seeing what others can't, looking confused and distraught, the symbols overlaying themselves in her mind - it'd be very easy to tell in visual form. In words, it's more cumbersome. Maybe when you get back to action scenes, you'll feel happier with it.