It's good, but to be honest such... I don't kno what to call it, internal monologues? Aren't my cup of tea.
An interesting setup. I'm eager to find out more.
It's pretty good, but I feel like we're missing some context here. Maybe it'll be explained later, though.
I like it. Poor Missy. No wonder she grew up so riddled with insecurity.
Hmm. Pure dialogue is interesting to read. Pretty amusing too, even thought I'm unfamiliar with the characters.
Also, I'm thinking than inbetween Inherit the Earth or after finishing it I could write some history of the world Dipsnig, Wenomir, Dorota, Reelshka, Brinika and the Underside goblins come from... but I'm afraid those stories would make little sense without context.