2012-03-21, 08:12 AM (ISO 8601)
Re: The Martial Swashbuckler (3.5, ToB, WIP, PEACH, MAR)
Skyfoot is really cool, although the language needs cleanup. Dancing Charge and Contemptuous Movement both look very cool too, and likewise Skydance, in addition to it being hilarious.
My big concern with Skyfoot/Skydance, though, is that everyone has been flying around for 8 and then 11 levels by the time either comes in. They may not actually be useful when flight is nigh-universal and even expected.
I'm iffy about Lightning Words, but I can't object to it strongly.
Spotlight may need its uses/day lowered. I'm pretty unsure about the focusing mechanic, too.
Last edited by gkathellar; 2012-03-21 at 08:13 AM.