Quote Originally Posted by Larkas View Post
Your line is WAY clearer and much more elegant. If you don't mind, I'm adding it to the feat text right now

Anyways, thank you very much for the input and the help. I'm glad you think it's balanced!
Feel free.


Anyway, I see a way to clear up Argentskin/Cold Ironhide/Mithrilscale a bit, and make 'em look a bit more professional.


In the first two, just replace "also" with "furthermore". Sounds better, means the same thing.

For the Mithrilscale line, I'd advise a rewrite like so...


Mithralscale [Mirran]

[...]

Benefits: You gain a +2 racial bonus to Climb, Jump and Tumble checks, as well as on all Reflex saves.
For Grace and Mastery, I'd add a comma after "[...] Evasion ability", in both cases.