I do apologies for my grammatical and spelling errors, i just can't seem to see them till there pointed out and then i am like... wow how did that slip through .
Tho being my nemesis as i seem to slip it in in all the wrong places without me realizing.
Thanks for the really in-depth critique! it has given me lots to think about when it comes to my structuring.
I will think on what you have said for a while then play with it some more. I might start looking at the other stuff i did to for this character. (this started as an abstract chr history for a dnd game i was playing in.)