Ok, Let's try this again.

Attributes +20BP
Human 0BP
Erased -10 BP
Moderate Addiction Cigarettes +10BP
SINner +5BP
Mild Allergy, Gold +5BP
Incompetent, Hacking +5BP
Sensitive Neural Structure +5BP

Stats (Unmodified/Modified)
Bod 3
Agi 6/9
Rea 4/6
Str 3/7
Cha 1
Int 3
Log 3
Wil 2
Ini 9
Edge 4
Essence

Skills
Pistol 6(specialized in Semi Auto) 26 BP
Dodge 4 16 BP
Perception 1 4 BP
Infiltrate 1 4 BP

Gear (50 BP spent for 250,000 Nuyen)
Synaptic Booster (2) 160,000
Muscle Augementation (4) 28,000
Muscle Toner (3) 24,000
Reflex Recorder (Pistols 1) 10,000
Chameleon Suit with Thermal Dampening (4) 10,000
Autopicker (6) 1200
Grapplegun with 200m Micro wire and rappelling gloves 670
Contacts (3) thermographic vision, flare compensator, low light vision 400
Geckotape gloves 250
Climbing gear 200
2 Ares IV Predators in quickdraw holsters 900
20 Extra clips with 300 rounds normal ammo 700
10 Extra clips with 150 rounds of APDS ammo 1100


Still have like 10k left.

While not as agile as the elf I wrote up this character feels better rounded at least. What do you think now?