Othar, A new Outsider who is neutral

[Debihuman]

What does this look like? I'd love to critique but I have just a stat block.


Size/Type: Medium Outsider

Should it have the Extraplanar subtype?

Now we come to some more obvious errors.

First, Outsiders have BAB like a fighter. It is equal to their HD.
Second, a pummel is really a slam attack. I think the damage is 1d6+10 not 1-6d10.

BAB should be 25

Attack is BAB + size modifier + Str modifier

25 +0 +8 = 33 +1 weapon focus for a total of +34 melee. [Fixed my earlier error here where I had the Dex mod instead of Str mod)]

Attack: Slam +34 melee (1d6+10)
Full Attack: 2 slams +34 melee (1d6+10)

It looks like it is missing 2 feats. You should consider giving it epic feats.

It seems to have a rather hodge-podge of abilities that don't give much a feeling of what this creature is like or even where it is from. Environment for Outsiders is almost always its home plane.

It's not bad, it's just a little boring.

Debby