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    Default Re: Ring V - Yet another OotS-style Webcomic

    Nice. I liked it so far. Just a little nitpick. Should the mom's speech bubble in the last panel be dashed? I think that usually denotes a whisper. As far as I've seen, a normal bubble without a speech line would be fine, especially since the character refers to the speaker as "mom" in his next line.

    EDIT: Curse my inadequate monitor! Does the character's last bubble say "I shouldn't have played WoW last night"?
    Last edited by hyperfreak497; 2007-11-24 at 12:11 AM.
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