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    I'm going to have to annoy Hyperfreak again, he's going to think I last updated in March

    Anyhow, this strip hasn't took me as long as I thought, so I'm going to post it straight away. 4 comics in 8 days...boy I'm not going to be able to keep this up!

    Anyhow, this is the first combat strip so far, the first chance you get to see how effective the team are etc. Now, one thing I've never been able to do very well is the sensation of movement, such as when someone is makes an attack or get's knocked back etc. I think I've managed to this to an extent in this comic, but any tips on how to do it better would be appreciated.

    Anyway, here it is:

    Strip 14 - Fight Scene: Take One
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    As always any comments, conjecture or criticism is welcome. It would be good to hear how people are getting used to the new art style, or whether it still hurts your eyes

    Anyway...hope you enjoy, next strip will be up Thursday probably, could be earier but based on my track record I'm not saying so!
    Last edited by banjo1985; 2007-12-03 at 10:09 AM.
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