Thanks for the feedback. About the hair, I might change the black mop thing around a bit, but the twisty thing is going to stay.

I read Failing Saves before I got the idea to do this. Then I did it, and I went back to Failing Saves, and I was like, "Holy crap! I copied this!"

And can you suggest better unconscious eyes? I couldn't really think of anything, but I will change it in the future if you can give me any ideas.