Just reread the comics (taking me a grand total of two minutes) and I have to congratulate you yet again. The only thing that could make it better is to either
a) put in a HALO reference to match the AMEN one (yes, I am aware Vespe is in AMEN so the chances are low)
or
b) give Shas'aia a cameo.

*hands over 10 gp*

That should do it.