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2006-08-07, 02:16 AM (ISO 8601)
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#11
Re: Writers, oh ye sad brethren of mine...
It's a risky venture, opening a story in the thick of an action sequence. It also seems a tad short for a chapter, but that's not really a problem, especially if its meant to be a short story.
The action itself is engaging, and fast paced. Sometimes, the writing gets a little loose, but it doesn't hurt the story all that much.
There's probably a lot more I can say about this, but my brain seems to have shut off. Perhaps another time. Do keep writing...