Originally Posted by
The Gremlin
Another is that your characters are too smug/cheerful. Bad things happen in FI, and your characters tend to be too...what's the word...'unflappable'. Or, more correctly, they have been 'flapped', but not changed. Everyone else has been affected in some way by the trouble. Mortals can age, people who age slowly can at least be cynical and stuff, but not either of teh Qs seem capable of this at the moment.
I'm not trying to argue, but perhaps you should either make the two Qs more 'changed' or whatever, or try a different character who isn't that Poke-Mon.