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    Default Re: Avatar Battle Royale: Discussion Thread XV, Now Darker and Edgier

    Quote Originally Posted by The Gremlin View Post
    Another is that your characters are too smug/cheerful. Bad things happen in FI, and your characters tend to be too...what's the word...'unflappable'. Or, more correctly, they have been 'flapped', but not changed. Everyone else has been affected in some way by the trouble. Mortals can age, people who age slowly can at least be cynical and stuff, but not either of teh Qs seem capable of this at the moment.
    I'm not trying to argue, but perhaps you should either make the two Qs more 'changed' or whatever, or try a different character who isn't that Poke-Mon.
    You are just making that assumption. How do you know they are unchanged? I haven't featured them in a comic yet.

    They are changed. You shall see that.
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