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    Default Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic

    I don't really like what you did with the first post. Beyond Wonderland is my favorite font, but it seems a little too dark for this comic. (And you sort of overused it)

    It makes you expect something grim or edgy, and then you open the spoiler boxes to see your comic, which is neither.

    That might give a bad first impression to a new reader me thinks.
    Last edited by Tiffanie Lirle; 2009-09-17 at 03:37 PM.