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    Default Re: Well That Was Unexpected Thread II: Now with 230% more lasers!

    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/l...orIng/TMA1.png Second to last panel: "I" should be "is" I think.


    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/l...orIng/TMA5.png 9th panel: Try "...turning yourself into diced meat".

    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/l...rIng/218-1.png , 3rd panel: You have part of the white on black speech bubble going over the front of the black on white speech bubble.


    Page 221 and 222 : No hints what was on that statement?

    Page 230, Panel 3: triangular part of speech bubble not filled in.

    Page 242, Panel 8: triangular part of speech bubble not filled in.

    Page 249, Panel 2, upper speech bubble: Should be "ate" not "at"
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