And thus, I bring you COMICS!
...Maybe I shouldn't update in the middle of the night.

So, that was chapter one, what do people think? I'm looking for feedback so I know how to make future chapters better, or at the very least not worse. Do you like the way the story is progressing? Did it move too fast? Do you feel lost? Do you like the art?
This is the end of the first chapter, and with it, the stuff I've really planned out, so if you're ever going to offer opinions, nows the time.

And speaking of opinions, I'd like more than one vote concerning my question above. Do you guys want an expositionatory infodump to help provide context, or do we move straight on into chapter 2: The Foxhound Howls.