Hallo all!

I wrote a poem recently, from the point of view of a character of mine, Dezzine. I would greatly appreciate thoughtful critique!

When I fight with you I
feel so stupid because
you're the one who
I don't have to fight at all
I don't have to fight you at all
And it's everyone else
Everybody else
They're the ones that I have to fight
So why do I go and
Make you so mad
Let you make me so mad
Because
We don't really have to fight at
all.

(If anyone would like to read more of my stuff, I've got a FictionPress account.)