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    Race:Elf Sex: Female Age: 90
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    Her older sister Kimmy, was watching June one day but she wandered off. She met a baby dragon on one of the paths and steped on its tail. She was trapped in the fire until Kiera, a child at the time, came and rescude her.
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    After she saved June she wandered back to town in search os some one.Kris found them and took them under his wing.
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    Kris
    Race: Human Sex: Male Age: 45
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    He is the team leader. He found everyone else in the party by coincidence or chance. He is truly the most loyal and brave on the team.He is dating Kimmy.
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    Kimmy
    Race:Elf Sex:Female Age: 103
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    After she lost June, she ran away from home, to escape punishment. She ended up living with a family of druids in the forest near her house. She is smart, silly, and childlike, oh and she has a crush on Kris She is dating Kris .

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    He is a phyco. He was raised by his warlord father and taught to kill first and ask questions later. He attacked the rest of the party at night. He had his ass handed to him. They only spared his life if he traveld with them.
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    This chaotic little halfling was trapped in jail.
    Until one day Kris came and bailed him out, but on the condition, he join his adventuring party. He enjoys puppies and long walks on the beach. Currently running from his party. He is now evil and turned on them, So did his friend Allen, who is dead.
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    "Technically I'm an elf, I do not sleep"

    You are still copying oots lines. The art is too rigid. Everybody is standing perfectly straight all the time, even when having their face bitten of by a horde of lizardmen. The text saying "apparently you are competent after all" is impossible to read, either do a zoom in on the sign, or better yet, ditch the sign all together. You have potential, you just need to stick in a bit more effort.
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    Look its alright but like shades i think your copying to many OOTS lines also improve your art a little bit and by the way your characters seem to me to be a bit to similar in the things they wear and it makes me confused about who's who. But ill watch this it i think it will get better with more experience and dont give up just yet youve got the makeings of a good avatarist in ya.

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    Heh, sorry. I've been reading oots all my life. I think it's imprinted on my brain. But from now on I'll stop and say, "hey, has the giant used this?"

    EDIT: Oh, and before I had ever thought of making a comic I was drawing bands of adventurers, so I dicided to make a comic. Originally these were pirates, but i gave them different classes and named them.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    Heh, sorry. I've been reading oots all my life. I think it's imprinted on my brain. But from now on I'll stop and say, "hey, has the giant used this?"

    EDIT: Oh, and before I had ever thought of making a comic I was drawing bands of adventurers, so I dicided to make a comic. Originally these were pirates, but i gave them different classes and named them.
    You've been reading oots all of your life? It's a fairly recent comic, are you sure you don't mean all of its "life"? I mean, I don't think you're 5.

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    It's possible for him to have been reading it from a very young age. Check his profile.

    EDIT: Huh? They only mis-spelled 'bored', 'killed' and forgot to add an apostrophe to 'I'm'.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Troll View Post
    It's possible for him to have been reading it from a very young age. Check his profile.

    EDIT: Huh? They only mis-spelled 'bored', 'killed' and forgot to add an apostrophe to 'I'm'.
    I think that was kinda the point.
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    A playgrounder and OotS-style artist who's approximately my age ? I didn't thought I'd see one in my life.

    Anyway, keep drawing. Everyone is not that great when they start, look at me:
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    And me:

    Old<>New

    Try personalizing your characters, giving them different colours and outfits.

    Here's an early comic I did, the day I got inkscape. At the core of it, they all have the same body, essentially the only difference is hair, and other accesories, however, they look completely different. Some of the art though, does indeed suck however.

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    Oh, I guess I didn't think a kid would read the comic, I've always seen it as a PG-10 or something.

    Anyways, it does look and sound like oots. The elf speaks in a convoluted way and seems to have some kind of rivalry with the halfling, the leader is surrounded by idiots...

    But that's ok. I mean, we all start like that. Not to seem condescending or anything, it's not about age. When you start, whether you're young or old, you do what you know first. I remember my first series, I wrote a few books, I was so proud of them... But at the end of the day, it was just a story about teenagers turning into animals, just like Animorphs was. And when I did write something different, it was still teenagers fighting something big. But step by step I broadened my horizon if I'm making sense.

    My advice would be to read a lot and get inspiration from everything, but really try to be unique and not to copy lines or plots. And keep at it, you'll get better by doing it a lot.

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    im twelve thank you very much
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    LOL actually laughed at that YAY my name is used cameo time could i be in it? as like a villian or something?? it would be fun plus i like the new outfits are very stylish that small guys hot LOL just kiding

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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    im twelve thank you very much
    I didn't mean you were under 10. I meant that if you have been reading oots for years, then you must have started reading when you were under 10.
    Not sure if that's what you were answering to, but I thought I'd clarify.

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    Third panel, It's 'Those pore animals', not thoes pore animals'.
    /nitpick.

    But I think you have potential.
    And made the text clouds line thinner.

    If you want to express how they're shouting or something, use '!', or bolded or enlarged text maybe?
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    Quote Originally Posted by dallas-dakota View Post
    Third panel, It's 'Those pore animals', not thoes pore animals'.
    /nitpick.
    (You had "poor" right. It's "Those poor animals". Not "pore".)

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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    Isn't a pore like a pimple or something?
    Yes and no. A pore is the part though which your skin breathes if I'm not mistaken. A pimple appears when a pore gets infected I think. Or maybe it's black heads. Anyway, you have pores everywhere on your skin, even when it's healthy, so it's not /like/ a pimple, but still skin-related.

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    So that guy up there said the animals had pores (yes they do but still)
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    Lissou is correct, I think.

    And Crimsonangel, you can always blame it on the intellegence of the character ^^
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    The only dumb ones are Kyle and Allen...

    Oh sorry you don't know who there names are yet!

    I'll make a character Bio later.

    Does anyone know how to put a spoiler in a spoiler?
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    Does anyone know how to put a spoiler in a spoiler?
    Just like you'd put anything else in a spoiler.

    [.spoiler][.spoiler]See?[./spoiler][./spoiler]

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    Thanks!
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    I'd recommend keeping text within a few sizes of each other and using one size(10 maybe) for whispering, another(12) for talking and (14 or 16) for shouting.

    The art's alright, what software do you use?
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    I use inkscape.
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    Right, that's what I use. I'd reccommend making the outline's of the character's a tad thicker then they should look right, I hope to see improvements in the art in coming weeks/months because it's good but has a lot more potential.
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    character bio is posted
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    I'm having a banner contest. Winner gets a trophy. OH! Did I mention it's a shiney trophey?

    Also, I'll add them to my comic as a hero/villaine.

    Banners should include a picture, a caption (maybe) and authers name, and the comics name (obviously. Other than that go crazy!
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    It's improving. Now as said already try to keep consistent font sizes. And if the writing doesn't fit in the speech balloon, try realigning the lines or changing the speech balloon, but dont warp the writing.

    Also try to keep the thickness of your outlines consistent. Only make the lines thicker on really huge objects or creatures.
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    So have you even got a name for the comic yet?

    Otherwise there might be a few problems with making a banner.

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    Sorry, I get lazy sometimes, plus I don't realy want to spend an hour clicking on 2,000 different pieces to change thier size. I only do that with avatars and small 3-4 pannel comics
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