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    This comic might not have very many jokes. I got the insperation from getting a bunch of legos for christmas and gathering my older legos, then having a giant legoey war with lotsa gore. Not alot of characters survive. Oh, and since alot of people die, I accept all cameos. Just keep in mind that the character might die. This is my second comic and I'm learning how to make characters run and make scenery. This comic is not DnD based!

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    Default Re: WAR GAMES! an oots style webcomic.

    ...which makes this one of the most redundant threads yet.

    Unless you thought someone might steal the thread title from you.

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    Default Re: WAR GAMES! an oots style webcomic.

    How soon is this... science project... going to be done?

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    *slots new ammo into gun*
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    but no seriously... only make a thread if you have something to go in the thread...
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    I agree with Fayt's point. One should create a first comic before creating a thread or else...

    *stabs for insufficient images*
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    I'll start my first comic ASAP. I have this banner though!
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    Default Re: WAR GAMES! an oots style webcomic.

    Eh.

    The whole "cameo" thing seems pretty gimmicky.

    I'll be honest: I'm not too optimistic about this comic, but I'll still at least reserve judgement until an actual comic has been posted.

    So...why did you decide to post this thread already?

    Also: if you're going to use the name "War Games," you have to live up to the standard that the movie set. Just warning ya.

    And just for good measure.

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    I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.
    I got that problem too when I made a few avatar versions of my own D&D group.

    *prepares diamonds for raise dead if comic does come*
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Szilard View Post
    That is where the save button comes in handy.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.
    See, this is why you make the comic before the thread.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Szilard View Post
    That is where the save button comes in handy.
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    Default Re: WAR GAMES! an oots style webcomic.

    Lawls... I hit the save button every 2 and a half minutes, so unless I whip up a comic that fast, I'll always have one saved. I'm surprised you haven't gotten that problem yet.
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    Weeee first comic.
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    Nice, an exciting begining to the comic.

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    you spelled missile wrong its missile not missle and that coming from me

    anyway i like your characters they look awesome i request a cameo please

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    A small suggestion: Colored eyes usually have a stroke.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Szilard View Post
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    Was a colored stroke.
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    So yeah, Colored eyes usually have a black stroke. But whatever.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Assassin 89 View Post
    *prepares diamonds for raise dead if comic does come*
    Guess I can cast raise dead now. Interesting introduction to a comic.
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    Default Re: WAR GAMES! an oots style webcomic.

    Shouldnt the characters actually...move their bodies while moving from panel to panel ?

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    they were running down a wall. There isn't much to change.
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    Quote Originally Posted by megadoomer45 View Post
    they were running down a wall. There isn't much to change.
    How about the background so that it doesnt look like it was duplicated. You know, move it qa bit so it isnt identical to the first one...

    And the characters that should be standing in panel 3 have the exact pose they had in panels 1 and 2.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bayar View Post
    How about the background so that it doesnt look like it was duplicated. You know, move it qa bit so it isnt identical to the first one...

    And the characters that should be standing in panel 3 have the exact pose they had in panels 1 and 2.
    It's a long WALL it's probably not gonna look that different. Plus most people don't change the way the run in normal life. The leg movement and such isn't gonna change that much.
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    Looks like it has potential... Although I don't really get the jokes... If there were any intended.

    You mispelled "Scorching," as well, and I didn't really get why the drow lady with red hair said "Ouch." It didn't look like any arrows or spells actually hit her...
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    'Tis a good start, bub. Keep at it.

    I didn't really get why the drow lady with red hair said "Ouch." It didn't look like any arrows or spells actually hit her...
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    Quote Originally Posted by megadoomer45 View Post
    It's a long WALL it's probably not gonna look that different. Plus most people don't change the way the run in normal life. The leg movement and such isn't gonna change that much.
    Most people can run without moving their legs? Wow. That's amazing.

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    Nits shall be picked.

    Alrighty. Movement of the arms and legs, at least a bit, is called for when characters are running. Maybe just a different position of the weapons. But something.

    The speech bubbles. Try to leave a little space between the text and the sides of the bubble.

    Eyes. For Brown-Skinned Dude's red eye, perhaps just a different color stroke? As long as it separates the eye from the face around it, it'd be good.

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    BUT WAIT. PRAISE IS FORTHCOMING?
    I like the general opening. Not having any idea what the hell's going on, well, that drew me in.
    Brown-Skinned Dude's crude-looking spear is cool, giving him that primal look (along with his ragged cape and all.)
    Drow Girl's skull-topped staff. I like it a lot. Very shaman-ish.
    Bandana Girl's alright, but I prefer the other two so far. Then again, this is just the first comic; my opinion can change quickly.

    All in all, a pretty good start.

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    Concerning the legs, it's not that big a deal, and certainly nothing to get hung up about.

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