WAR GAMES! an oots style webcomic.

[CrimsonAngel]

This comic might not have very many jokes. I got the insperation from getting a bunch of legos for christmas and gathering my older legos, then having a giant legoey war with lotsa gore. Not alot of characters survive. Oh, and since alot of people die, I accept all cameos. Just keep in mind that the character might die. This is my second comic and I'm learning how to make characters run and make scenery. This comic is not DnD based!

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comic is to long. http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...ris/g29060.png

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a few of dah paladins! (By vulion! )

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[Keris]

...which makes this one of the most redundant threads yet.

Unless you thought someone might steal the thread title from you.

[Beans]

How soon is this... science project... going to be done?

[Fay Graydon]

*slots new ammo into gun*
Wasting playgrounders time is punishable.... by death...

IMA CHARGIN MA LAZOR!

but no seriously... only make a thread if you have something to go in the thread...
Otherwise it would be like getting all the skin for your flesh golum and then realizing that you have nowt in the way of bones and flesh...
and ill tell you now, its not easy collecting bones and flesh when trapped in your castle by an angry mob with pitchforks...

[Assassin89]

I agree with Fayt's point. One should create a first comic before creating a thread or else...

*stabs for insufficient images*

[CrimsonAngel]

I'll start my first comic ASAP. I have this banner though!

[Sneak]

Eh.

The whole "cameo" thing seems pretty gimmicky.

I'll be honest: I'm not too optimistic about this comic, but I'll still at least reserve judgement until an actual comic has been posted.

So...why did you decide to post this thread already?

Also: if you're going to use the name "War Games," you have to live up to the standard that the movie set. Just warning ya.

And just for good measure.

[CrimsonAngel]

I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.

[Assassin89]

I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.

I got that problem too when I made a few avatar versions of my own D&D group.

*prepares diamonds for raise dead if comic does come*

[Szilard]

I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.

That is where the save button comes in handy.

[CrimsonAngel]

That is where the save button comes in handy.

I'm not in a good mood anymore.

[Ninja Chocobo]

I was working on the first stupid comic and inkscaoe froze RIGHT before I friggin exported it. So now Ive got the best comic I've ever made and now it dosn't exist. Yay.

See, this is why you make the comic before the thread.

[Fay Graydon]

That is where the save button comes in handy.

THERES A SAVE BUTTON?!

[Wreckingrocc]

Lawls... I hit the save button every 2 and a half minutes, so unless I whip up a comic that fast, I'll always have one saved. I'm surprised you haven't gotten that problem yet.

[CrimsonAngel]

Weeee first comic.

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[ThePhantom]

Nice, an exciting begining to the comic.

[someonenonotyou]

you spelled missile wrong its missile not missle and that coming from me

anyway i like your characters they look awesome i request a cameo please

[Szilard]

A small suggestion: Colored eyes usually have a stroke.

[CrimsonAngel]

A small suggestion: Colored eyes usually have a stroke.

Was a colored stroke.

[Szilard]

So yeah, Colored eyes usually have a black stroke. But whatever.

[Assassin89]

*prepares diamonds for raise dead if comic does come*

Guess I can cast raise dead now. Interesting introduction to a comic.

[Bayar]

Shouldnt the characters actually...move their bodies while moving from panel to panel ?

[DoomITP]

they were running down a wall. There isn't much to change.

[Bayar]

they were running down a wall. There isn't much to change.

How about the background so that it doesnt look like it was duplicated. You know, move it qa bit so it isnt identical to the first one...

And the characters that should be standing in panel 3 have the exact pose they had in panels 1 and 2.

[DoomITP]

How about the background so that it doesnt look like it was duplicated. You know, move it qa bit so it isnt identical to the first one...

And the characters that should be standing in panel 3 have the exact pose they had in panels 1 and 2.

It's a long WALL it's probably not gonna look that different. Plus most people don't change the way the run in normal life. The leg movement and such isn't gonna change that much.

[Wreckingrocc]

Looks like it has potential... Although I don't really get the jokes... If there were any intended.

You mispelled "Scorching," as well, and I didn't really get why the drow lady with red hair said "Ouch." It didn't look like any arrows or spells actually hit her...

[Miraqariftsky]

'Tis a good start, bub. Keep at it.

I didn't really get why the drow lady with red hair said "Ouch." It didn't look like any arrows or spells actually hit her...

Yellow-fletched arrow. Waist-level wound. Red line.

[T-O-E]

It's a long WALL it's probably not gonna look that different. Plus most people don't change the way the run in normal life. The leg movement and such isn't gonna change that much.

Most people can run without moving their legs? Wow. That's amazing.

You learn something each day.

[Beans]

Nits shall be picked.

Alrighty. Movement of the arms and legs, at least a bit, is called for when characters are running. Maybe just a different position of the weapons. But something.

The speech bubbles. Try to leave a little space between the text and the sides of the bubble.

Eyes. For Brown-Skinned Dude's red eye, perhaps just a different color stroke? As long as it separates the eye from the face around it, it'd be good.

Spelling. Yes, none of us can escape it.


BUT WAIT. PRAISE IS FORTHCOMING?
I like the general opening. Not having any idea what the hell's going on, well, that drew me in.
Brown-Skinned Dude's crude-looking spear is cool, giving him that primal look (along with his ragged cape and all.)
Drow Girl's skull-topped staff. I like it a lot. Very shaman-ish.
Bandana Girl's alright, but I prefer the other two so far. Then again, this is just the first comic; my opinion can change quickly.

All in all, a pretty good start.

[BRC]

Concerning the legs, it's not that big a deal, and certainly nothing to get hung up about.