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    Default Crispydave's comic of randomeness In non-OOTS style!!!(looking for honest opinions)

    So until I can get a server up im going to post my comics here.

    As the title says the comic is completely random much inspired by xkcd

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    I am aware of the white space above below the comic I am working on this. problem fixed
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    Default Re: Crispydave's comic of randomeness In non-OOTS style!!!(looking for honest opinion

    Get rid of all the white space above your comic.
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    Default Re: Crispydave's comic of randomeness In non-OOTS style!!!(looking for honest opinion

    You might want to crop the image, because there is an excessive amount of white space. The comic is not that interesting because each panel looks like it was copy and pasted, but only the dialogue changes.
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    Default Re: Crispydave's comic of randomeness In non-OOTS style!!!(looking for honest opinion

    Quote Originally Posted by dallas-dakota View Post
    Get rid of all the white space above your comic.
    I thought you were sneak

    I am working on that until then just deal with it.



    The comic is not that interesting because each panel looks like it was copy and pasted, but only the dialogue changes.
    since I am not a very good artist the comic will mostly be about the text and the pictures will be very basic.
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    Default Re: Crispydave's comic of randomeness In non-OOTS style!!!(looking for honest opinion

    I think you should at least get some more distinctive characters. Even if its only different colors. But also the worst artists could make more than just stick figures that dont even have joints, I mean come on. Either youre being extremely lazy or you are making these comics with your feet
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    Quote Originally Posted by Threeshades View Post
    I think you should at least get some more distinctive characters. Even if its only different colors. But also the worst artists could make more than just stick figures that dont even have joints, I mean come on. Either youre being extremely lazy or you are making these comics with your feet
    I actually only use one foot.
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