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2008-12-19, 10:34 PM (ISO 8601)
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June
Race:Elf Sex: Female Age: 90
Class:Cleric lvl 10
Her older sister Kimmy, was watching June one day but she wandered off. She met a baby dragon on one of the paths and steped on its tail. She was trapped in the fire until Kiera, a child at the time, came and rescude her.Spoiler
Kiera
Race:Human Sex:Female Age: 23
Class: Sharpshooter (Ranger with a gun) lvl 9
After she saved June she wandered back to town in search os some one.Kris found them and took them under his wing.Spoiler
Kris
Race: Human Sex: Male Age: 45
Class: Fighter lvl 9
He is the team leader. He found everyone else in the party by coincidence or chance. He is truly the most loyal and brave on the team.He is dating Kimmy.Spoiler
Kimmy
Race:Elf Sex:Female Age: 103
Class: Druid lvl 12
After she lost June, she ran away from home, to escape punishment. She ended up living with a family of druids in the forest near her house. She is smart, silly, and childlike,oh and she has a crush on KrisShe is dating Kris .
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Allen
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Race:Human Sex: Male Age: 31
Class: Rouge lvl 8
He is a phyco. He was raised by his warlord father and taught to kill first and ask questions later. He attacked the rest of the party at night. He had his ass handed to him. They only spared his life if he traveld with them.Spoiler
Kyle
DEADZOMBIE
Race:Halfling Sex: Male Age:42
Class:Fighter Lvl 9
This chaotic little halfling was trapped in jail.
Until one day Kris came and bailed him out, but on the condition, he join his adventuring party. He enjoys puppies and long walks on the beach. Currently running from his party. He is now evil and turned on them, So did his friend Allen, who is dead.Spoiler
Elrond
Race:Halfling-elf ewww Sex: male Age: 52
Class:Necromancer
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2008-12-19, 11:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: oots comic by me *now with plot*
"Technically I'm an elf, I do not sleep"
You are still copying oots lines. The art is too rigid. Everybody is standing perfectly straight all the time, even when having their face bitten of by a horde of lizardmen. The text saying "apparently you are competent after all" is impossible to read, either do a zoom in on the sign, or better yet, ditch the sign all together. You have potential, you just need to stick in a bit more effort.Last edited by Shades of Gray; 2008-12-19 at 11:20 PM.
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2008-12-20, 01:46 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: oots comic by me *now with plot*
Look its alright but like shades i think your copying to many OOTS lines also improve your art a little bit and by the way your characters seem to me to be a bit to similar in the things they wear and it makes me confused about who's who. But ill watch this it i think it will get better with more experience and dont give up just yet youve got the makeings of a good avatarist in ya.
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2008-12-20, 06:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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Heh, sorry. I've been reading oots all my life. I think it's imprinted on my brain. But from now on I'll stop and say, "hey, has the giant used this?"
EDIT: Oh, and before I had ever thought of making a comic I was drawing bands of adventurers, so I dicided to make a comic. Originally these were pirates, but i gave them different classes and named them.Last edited by CrimsonAngel; 2008-12-20 at 07:49 AM.
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2008-12-20, 08:38 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-12-20, 09:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: oots comic by me *now with plot*
It's possible for him to have been reading it from a very young age. Check his profile.
EDIT: Huh? They only mis-spelled 'bored', 'killed' and forgot to add an apostrophe to 'I'm'.Last edited by T-O-E; 2008-12-20 at 09:48 AM.
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2008-12-20, 10:10 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-12-20, 10:16 AM (ISO 8601)
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A playgrounder and OotS-style artist who's approximately my age ? I didn't thought I'd see one in my life.
Anyway, keep drawing. Everyone is not that great when they start, look at me:
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2008-12-20, 11:24 AM (ISO 8601)
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And me:
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Try personalizing your characters, giving them different colours and outfits.
Here's an early comic I did, the day I got inkscape. At the core of it, they all have the same body, essentially the only difference is hair, and other accesories, however, they look completely different. Some of the art though, does indeed suck however.
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2008-12-20, 01:17 PM (ISO 8601)
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Oh, I guess I didn't think a kid would read the comic, I've always seen it as a PG-10 or something.
Anyways, it does look and sound like oots. The elf speaks in a convoluted way and seems to have some kind of rivalry with the halfling, the leader is surrounded by idiots...
But that's ok. I mean, we all start like that. Not to seem condescending or anything, it's not about age. When you start, whether you're young or old, you do what you know first. I remember my first series, I wrote a few books, I was so proud of them... But at the end of the day, it was just a story about teenagers turning into animals, just like Animorphs was. And when I did write something different, it was still teenagers fighting something big. But step by step I broadened my horizon if I'm making sense.
My advice would be to read a lot and get inspiration from everything, but really try to be unique and not to copy lines or plots. And keep at it, you'll get better by doing it a lot.
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2008-12-20, 08:13 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: oots comic by me *now with plot*
im twelve thank you very much
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2008-12-20, 09:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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new comic
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2008-12-21, 02:15 AM (ISO 8601)
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LOL actually laughed at that YAY my name is used cameo time could i be in it? as like a villian or something?? it would be fun plus i like the new outfits are very stylish that small guys hot LOL just kiding
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2008-12-21, 03:37 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-12-21, 03:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-12-21, 06:45 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-12-21, 08:40 AM (ISO 8601)
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Yes and no. A pore is the part though which your skin breathes if I'm not mistaken. A pimple appears when a pore gets infected I think. Or maybe it's black heads. Anyway, you have pores everywhere on your skin, even when it's healthy, so it's not /like/ a pimple, but still skin-related.
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2008-12-21, 08:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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So that guy up there said the animals had pores (yes they do but still)
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2008-12-21, 08:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-12-21, 08:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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The only dumb ones are Kyle and Allen...
Oh sorry you don't know who there names are yet!
I'll make a character Bio later.
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2008-12-21, 08:56 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-12-21, 08:57 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: oots comic by me *now with plot*
Thanks!
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2008-12-21, 09:00 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'd recommend keeping text within a few sizes of each other and using one size(10 maybe) for whispering, another(12) for talking and (14 or 16) for shouting.
The art's alright, what software do you use?
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2008-12-21, 09:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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I use inkscape.
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2008-12-21, 09:22 AM (ISO 8601)
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Right, that's what I use. I'd reccommend making the outline's of the character's a tad thicker then they should look right, I hope to see improvements in the art in coming weeks/months because it's good but has a lot more potential.
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2008-12-21, 09:30 AM (ISO 8601)
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character bio is posted
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2008-12-21, 09:34 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'm having a banner contest. Winner gets a trophy. OH! Did I mention it's a shiney trophey?
Also, I'll add them to my comic as a hero/villaine.
Banners should include a picture, a caption (maybe) and authers name, and the comics name (obviously. Other than that go crazy!Last edited by CrimsonAngel; 2008-12-22 at 05:55 PM.
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2008-12-21, 09:39 AM (ISO 8601)
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It's improving. Now as said already try to keep consistent font sizes. And if the writing doesn't fit in the speech balloon, try realigning the lines or changing the speech balloon, but dont warp the writing.
Also try to keep the thickness of your outlines consistent. Only make the lines thicker on really huge objects or creatures.
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2008-12-21, 09:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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So have you even got a name for the comic yet?
Otherwise there might be a few problems with making a banner.
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2008-12-21, 09:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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Sorry, I get lazy sometimes, plus I don't realy want to spend an hour clicking on 2,000 different pieces to change thier size. I only do that with avatars and small 3-4 pannel comics
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