Avatar Battle Royale Discussion Thread XXVI: It's gonna be the Future Imperfect soon!

[Mad Mask]

Well, here's an updated version of the banner:



And one for the UNA:



If anyone is absent, please tell me.

[Tiffanie Lirle]

Something seems off about your template for my character, other then the missing camouflage pattern on the shirt that is.

I'll get back to you on that once I can figure out what it is.

Edit - Aha, the tail is missing and you used black as the eye color instead of

The ears are also kinda weird. <.<

Edit 2 - You fixed the eyes I see, but now the ears are even weirder.

[SinisterPenguin]

I like the contrast between the two. Who's the guy in the pinkish-orange shirt to the far right, in the second row, though?

[X2]

Well, here's an updated version of the banner:

*peekshures*

Now make the Neutrals!

I haven't forgotten about my Timelord.

[Mad Mask]

Something seems off about your template for my character, other then the missing camouflage pattern on the shirt that is.

She's not in her military uniform, so a camouflage vest was unnecessary.

Totally not because I didn't want to spend a lot of time on the tiny coloured bits.

Edit - Aha, the tail is missing and you used black as the eye color instead of

The ears are also kinda weird. <.<

There you go, fixed. But the tail is hidden by Karen Dewey's head.

I like the contrast between the two. Who's the guy in the pinkish-orange shirt to the far right, in the second row, though?

Thanks. The guy is an exemplary UNA citizen, like the guy on the left with the brown clothes is an "average" ALF member.

[Shades of Gray]

Objection. Antoine doesn't have eyes. And the shadow is actually always there.

[Mad Mask]

Objection. Antoine doesn't have eyes. And the shadow is actually always there.

It looks awful with my style.

So let's say he removed that illusion to take the picture.

[CrimsonAngel]

Hey check it out.


I think i'm getting better.

[X2]

Now make the Neutrals!

I haven't forgotten about my Timelord.

Did I say something wrong? Are my posts being blocked?

Aknowledgement please!

[Nameless]

Hey check it out.

*Checks it out* Wow, that's something!

@MM: Awesome, much better.

[Tiffanie Lirle]

Just so you know, I intend to keep nitpicking until my demands have been met.

She's not in her military uniform, so a camouflage vest was unnecessary.

It's a normal shirt. Nothing to do with any military or peacekeeper gear. <.<

Totally not because I didn't want to spend a lot of time on the tiny coloured bits.

What, just use the paintbrush tool and mix a few globs of color together. Making camo patterns is ridiculously easy.

And by moving the ears in your last edit you made the positioning even weirder.

[Darklord Bright]

What about Bright? I'd be interested to see him in your style, the Teifling devil-armed one-eyed awesome thing that he is.

(Not really a Devil Arm, just looks like one. Works the same as his gauntlets before)

[Shades of Gray]

It looks awful with my style.

So let's say he removed that illusion to take the picture.

... It's not an illusion. He actually can't get rid of the shadows. And part of the problem is that you made his hair too short (I think, haven't drawn him in a while)

[Khaeta]

@MM:
*raises hand*
I'm missing! (if you remember me...)

[Green-Shirt Q]

If anyone is absent, please tell me.

Yeah. Nath Bortak, the gargoyle, is missing.

Unfortunetly I don't have a picture on me at the moment (being away from my "art" computer) but you know who I'm talking about, right?

Also, you're missing red-shirt Q in ALF. I would like you to add him in, if that's okay.

[kpenguin]

*whips MM*

Get back to working on the other stuff you're working on!

[The Gremlin]

Well, here's an updated version of the banner:



And one for the UNA:



If anyone is absent, please tell me.

Hmm...wow, the contrast between the two groups is huge. For one thing, almost all the UNA are human, and all of them humanoid.
I have three characters in the UNA, all of which were hidden up til now. Ned, the cloaker, who will be introduced in the beginning of FI. And two Dvati (Google it if you're not sure what they look like)who both wear dark green robes and are mages.
Also: I really like the picture of me. I've always wanted to give my character whisker-eyebrows, but have sucked too much at art to do so.

Also, I'd like to propose 'Thunderdome' from this site for FI's theme song. Just because it owns.

Of course, Carmina Burana is better, but I guess it's out of the question.

[BRC]

Woah, great picture.

My only complaint is that Grandfather should be hunched over a little using a cane. He's an old man. A brilliant old man who knows everything there is to know about manipulating public perceptions, but an Old Man nonetheless.

However, you got his clothing spot-on.

[Grim ranger]

Well, here's an updated version of the banner:



And one for the UNA:



If anyone is absent, please tell me.

Very good pictures, though Grim should have his swords (nitpick)

I guess we are finally nearing the FI...damn it has been long wait

Also, I wonder if this song would fit in casual narrative of FI world

[Squark]

Well, here's an updated version of the banner:



And one for the UNA:



If anyone is absent, please tell me.

still can't see them...


Annoying. Can I get some help here again, Gremlin?

[Keris]

Of course, Carmina Burana is better, but I guess it's out of the question.

Orff's Carmina Burana is something like an hour long. That makes it a little difficult to use as a theme.

still can't see them...

Are you still blocking MM's images? I recall you setting up a filter during Greek avatar week.
What happens when you open the image directly?
http://www.kinogo.com/victor/fi/banners/fibanner2.png
http://www.kinogo.com/victor/fi/bann...banneruna1.png

[Calamity]

MM: Calamity has human shaped feet. >.>

Cool banners though.

EDIT: However, you and I have very different portrayals of my character. :S

[-skimmer-]

And one for the UNA:



If anyone is absent, please tell me.

Well, although it was probably on purpose, I'm kinda disapointed about lack of posing character in this banner compared to the banner of resistance. I know they're supposed to look like a good guys (and lot of them probably are), but they somehow reminds me about a bunch of school kids standing in front of a camera....

I still like how you drew Skimmer though

[Mina Kobold]

... It's not an illusion. He actually can't get rid of the shadows. And part of the problem is that you made his hair too short (I think, haven't drawn him in a while)

The flash temporarily light up his face for the picture and they magically added eyes afterwards because hew looked creepy without them

@Mad: Well the banners are certainly well made but I agree that Sinister should look cuter (isn't it part of his problems?) and there are no KOBOLDS!!

[Grim ranger]

Well, although it was probably on purpose, I'm kinda disapointed about lack of posing character in this banner compared to the banner of resistance. I know they're supposed to look like a good guys (and lot of them probably are), but they somehow reminds me about a bunch of school kids standing in front of a camera....

I still like how you drew Skimmer though

Well, we could always say that they were taken by Powers That Be beyond fourth wall to be photographed. That could explain it...

Cameraman: Right, so are all of you guys ready for the picture?

*collective mumbling*

Cameraman: Seems so! So stand together over there, and...

Powers That Be: Hey, where is Grim Ranger?

*collective murmur*

Cameraman: Where in the...Grim! Stop stabbing the crew!

*screaming, noises of general disorder*

[BRC]

Edit: Also, why is Ins so short? Grandfather looks like a giant next to him.

[The Gremlin]

The flash temporarily light up his face for the picture and they magically added eyes afterwards because hew looked creepy without them

@Mad: Well the banners are certainly well made but I agree that Sinister should look cuter (isn't it part of his problems?) and there are no KOBOLDS!!

Personally, I have a problem with making somebody change their art style to accommodate the others. MM made this plot, he should be able to make the banner the way he thinks is best.
If you look at the two banners, you see a huge difference: The UNA is friendly, the ALF has creepy inhuman evil creatures. That's exactly the way it should be: The UNA says we're evil, heartless people, and deep down, we wonder if they're right.

[Traker]

Can my character be part of the UNA?

[The Gremlin]

Can my character be part of the UNA?

Sure. Just make sure to act friendly.

[-skimmer-]

Well, we could always say that they were taken by Powers That Be beyond fourth wall to be photographed. That could explain it...

Cameraman: Right, so are all of you guys ready for the picture?

*collective mumbling*

Cameraman: Seems so! So stand together over there, and...

Powers That Be: Hey, where is Grim Ranger?

*collective murmur*

Cameraman: Where in the...Grim! Stop stabbing the crew!

*screaming, noises of general disorder*

That explains where he left his swords