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    This is the thread for my webcomic Snowblind. It uses the most exact imitation of Order of the Stick graphical style as I could manage, though the story and characters are all my own.

    Well, it's somewhat based on a DnD campaign I'm currently running, and it takes place in a far-north setting that borrows heavily from Norse mythology.

    I will post Bios for the characters eventually, as they appear. I doubt I'll ever update regularly, but you can expect a comic every 1 to 2 weeks. Of course I'll probably put them out a little faster at the start.

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    Tell me what you think.
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    Well, the art looks nice Can't really comment on anythings besides that, put I'll check it out when you update.
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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    I posted the next strip, now there is actual dialog. You should be able to discern the characters' names now.
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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    Your should correct the speech bubbles. It's cutting off the words.

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    Looks like it could be interesting. Will keep an eye out for this.

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    You've got me drawn in, now you just need to hook me within the next few comics to hold my interest. I cannot see any art faults, and the story, I expect, will be revealed in time.

    Good luck, and I hope you make a fan out of me!
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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    The speech-bubbles seems a bit small at some points, but otherwise I think this has real potential
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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    The next comic will be up tomorrow. It was a *mammoth* of a job!

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    I get it!

    What? I do! Even if it isn't out yet, I get it!
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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    New one's out, it was too big for photobucket (dimensions, not file size) so I used imageshack. I'll probably just use that from now on. It's not like I'm posting this anywhere else.

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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    This is shaping up to be a decent comic, although your walking pose needs a bit of work. At the moment it looks almost like they're skipping along.

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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    Definitely work on the speech bubbles.

    The first strip gave me a chuckle. And your mammoth was impressive.

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    Default Re: Snowblind - Into the North

    I tried to fix my too-small speech bubble problem in the latest strip. Also, I'm looking at Rich's work to try and fix my walking pose.

    EDIT: Ah, I see. Back leg bent, front leg straight. I'll keep that in mind for the next strip.
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    Hey cool, i've used a mammoth template too!
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    This is pretty good.
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    I like it, hope you continue with this.
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