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    Default Re: Well That Was Unexpected Thread II: Now with 230% more lasers!

    Try to do a better job with the text bubbles. The last panel was especially bad with of the weave-yness of Kayl and Torn conversation.
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    They look fine to me, but I can try to make text bubbles less weav-y from now on.

    Comic 342 is up. Marnia's backstory gets a bit more detailed look at.

    Also, I know it's not original, but, Khorne Flakes. The true breakfast of Champions.

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    Hmmm.... Anyone else think that was a rather abrupt jump to part of her back story?
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    I know, I know, but I couldn't come up with any ideas for a 1st panel before the flashback.

    Comic 43 is remade. Old comic from the 1st chapter remade to explain some of the backstory of The Emperor, as well as best demonstrate the scope of his power and a bit of motive. This is the way this comic was meant to be.

    Also, it has 3x the panels of the original.

    Old comic will be put into the Extras section once I update the archives.

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    Is that missing picture panel supposed to be there?
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    Just as planned. I drew a replica of the Missing Panel thing as a replacement to the what was supposed to be Static (think White Noise, except a less than piss poor attempt at me to redraw it) from the original version of the panel. I see that it's pretty convincing to say the least.

    Again, I really liked how that comic turned out because it better explains the main plot, better explains some of The Emperor's backstory, and is overall the way that comic should've been drawn in the first place.

    In the meantime, Comic 34# is up. Continuation on The Major's intervention.

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    Default Re: Well That Was Unexpected Thread II: Now with 230% more lasers!

    Gotta say, Powers seems pretty darn unkillable at this point. If he wasn't so stupid, I might even say he was a marty sue. I wonder what will actually end up killing him in the end (he is a bad guy, after all. His defeat is eventual, but so far he just seems invincable. So this will be interesting)...

    The speech bubbles are a little...untidy. This isn't really a problem or anything, but I was slightly overwhelmed and didn't know which bubvle I should read first! Although the order didn't seem to make much of a difference anyway.

    I found Power's request for the "heroes" to stand under the decapitated tarry head amusing. But than it brought up this question:

    If Powers could survive decapitation, wouldn't the tarry be able to?
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    Powers is overpowered, both Just as Planned and Duly Noted (His name is MAJOR MAX POWERS!! COME ON! Do I have to call him Duke Nukem?) Don't worry, his fate by the end of the comic has already been determined.

    Comic 348 is up. Archives are partially updated, but they're pretty skrewed up right now. A comic's missing, so right now what really is comic 348 is 347 in the archives.

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    Is decent. Continue.
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    So, wait. When does Rand become the ultra-epic arcane being of awesome he is in the SMBGs?

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    Memn, you know you made me depressed pretty much all of 2 days ago?

    Anyways, i'm trying something new with text. Not the arrangement, but that is new as well. Tell me how either of them are going.

    Comic 349 is up. Note to self: FIX THE ARCHIVES!!

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    Sorry; Q basically posted enough for three people though.

    Text is easier to read, can't tell what the other thing is.
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    Eh, I don't expect you to, just tell me if the quality of writing goes up or down.

    BTW, all is forgiven.
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    Very nice! Pretty funny, exciting, and the art is more than decent. I'm quite into the story now, so I'll be reading consistently. Thanks!
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    I think I may try too hard on the art. If my guns look good than that's okay.

    Comic 350 is up. I had fun making this one.

    And I still need to fix the archives.

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    Didn't even look at him yet to see why...
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    ...wut? No really what are you saying?

    And Comic 351 is up. Comic took 4* days to make just to see Marnia go Super Saiyan. Good to see you're getting your time's worth huh?

    And just btw, my initial plan was for 350 and 351 to be one comic, unfortunately by their sizes that would be a pipe dream.

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    Well, she didn't even look at him to see why he was saying that he couldn't see her.


    Pretty good comic.

    Why is there a second marnia in that one panel with four arms?
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    Well, where is Marnia 2 located, and how many 4-armed characters are there in my comic? I gave you a few subtle clues as to who 4-armed Marnia is.

    Comic 352 is up. Not that funny, but it's a fight scene, can't go wrong there.

    Really like the design I settled on with Marnia's wings. I've had like 3 other concepts than that one came up spur of the moment. First time i've EVER made wings that I thought looked good.

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    Oh, yeah that makes sense.


    And these wings are better than the ones in 351.
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    So now Marnia got super-powers like The Emperor after reciting the most diffused cheat-code? Cool.
    The wings look good So does her hammer. Or whatever it is now.


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    It's a shapechanging hammer that Marnia has the ability to call into her hands similar to how Xeno and The Emperor (Although you probably haven't seen The Emperor do it) call swords into their hands.

    Also, poor Omega, I put him in a maid's uniform and there's nothing he can do about it. Now his pictures are on the internet for all to see.

    Comic 353 is up. Nothing special just...stuff.

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    I don't see a maid in the comic...
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    Go to the Extras section on the first page, and look for Comic 4 of Metroid: Consternation.
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    Durr.... I should have seen your avy.
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    If there is enough demand, I can give Omega a cameo in WTwU.

    Speaking of Omega, Metroid: Consternation 6 is up. Sadly no frilly dresses were used in the making of this comic.

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    Eh, hardly ever get comments for Metroid: Consternation. Par of the course I guess, but I liked the way that comic came out, especially with the non-standard background.

    Comic 354 is up. As you can tell i'm losing my mind. =\

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    Funny effect.

    Where did it come from? Or did you make it yourself?
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    That a space suit?
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    Is that the guy she beat up when she thought he was Rand or is it Rand?
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