Well That Was Unexpected Thread II: Now with 230% more lasers!

[HalfTangible]

It's kind of amazing the degree to which Kayl will go to piss somebody off XD

[Green-Shirt Q]

I was a little confused at first as to why Torn put his face into his pancakes. At first I thought he was poisoned or something. Then I noticed Kayl's hand there.

In stick figure style, these kinds of action scenes are a little harder to get across. Some lines that show action and direction would've helped.

As for the rest of the comic, it was funny but really crazy. I can't imagine somebody in their right minds doing everything Kayl just did. It seems like something Deadpool might do, maybe.

Then again, these kinds of things happen a lot in WTWU. Characters go REALLY out of their way to piss people off, and characters do things everybody else consider insane. So this get's a pass.

[memnarch]

Good messy hair look.

I forget, what comic did he say that?

[Emperor Ing]

Uhh...i'm not sure. You mentioned something like this in a comment to Comic 308

Comic 378 is up. Stuff

Questions? Comments? Critique?

[HalfTangible]

The dialogue is a little confusing ("you couldn't have laid anything") and you forgot to combine one of the speech bubble things.

[Emperor Ing]

What the crap is Photobucket doing? It's such a POS now it's....AUUGHH!!

Reupload

[memnarch]

Sorry, I'm rather jumpy when I post. I meant to say "Where does Torn say that Kayl should be nice?"

[Emperor Ing]

That's a lot of comics to dig through, i'll get back to you on that.

Comic 379 is up. Hopefully this one sucks slightly less than the last one.

Questions? Comments? Critique?

[memnarch]

...
Hopefully this one sucks slightly less than the last one.

...

Success!

Hope the black/green thing shows up again.

[Emperor Ing]

I like black and green
You'll see more of them I can guarantee that.

Hay guys check this out, not comic 380 is up.
AKA Metroid Consternation 8. Not that anyone reads it.

IN OTHER NEWS: The archive just broke the forum's 50,000 character limit. The Chapter 8 Archive has been moved to my second post in this thread. It can be found in the first page.

Questions? Comments? Critique?

[HalfTangible]

It's 'on doing these things' not 'in'

[Emperor Ing]

I know it's not what people come here for, but hey, I like it and it's a fun thing to do when I get writer's block.

I can definitely say that I am serious about it, and I have large parts of the story already planned out. I can promise it'll be much simpler than WTwU, and if you've played Metroid (Zero Mission) it'll be easier to follow.

Not Metroid: Consternation 9 is up.
Comic 380 for real. I love small-panel comics.

Questions? Comments? Critique?

[memnarch]

*Waits for next comic*

[Emperor Ing]

*is posting the next comic*

AKA 381.

!euwstions? Comentns? Cirthaq?e
(don't ask)

[memnarch]

Error in panel 5.

I like this comic. Fairly good.

[Emperor Ing]

Fun

Comic 382

Questions? Comments? Memnarch?

[memnarch]

You called?

Another amusing comic.

[Emperor Ing]

Well you account for just under 30% of the total posts in this thread and, except for me, have more posts in this thread than everyone else combined. Don't believe me? You do the math.

Comic 383 is up. 24 panel comic has 24 panels.

Questions? Comments? Critique?

[memnarch]

Nice touch with the slowly changing skin colour.

[blackjack217]

We are all just stunned into silence by your sheer brilliance.

[Emperor Ing]

It happens.
I just remembered while making the comic that it's cold outside and Marnia's keeping the door open. Rand has spells and has used them (twice if I recall) that offer protection, but I figured that having the spell last that long would be kind of stretching it.

Anyways, sorry guys, Metroid Consternation 9.

[Emperor Ing]

To get you an idea on how hard this comic was to make, I have 10 unused panels, 6 of them for one comic idea, 4 for another. I'll upload 'em to the Extras section later.

I settled on this one. Comic 384 is FINALLY up.

Impatient cries of relief? Comments? Critique?

[HalfTangible]

To get you an idea on how hard this comic was to make, I have 10 unused panels, 6 of them for one comic idea, 4 for another. I'll upload 'em to the Extras section later.

I settled on this one. Comic 384 is FINALLY up.

Impatient cries of relief? Comments? Critique?

... i am confuseded

[memnarch]

... i am confuseded

I second this.

[Emperor Ing]

Rand is gaming while talking to Kayl about the king's festival that is obviously a deathtrap. Rand speculates that Governor-General Vance Mother****ing Stubbs' 100 baneblades are going to make an appearance, while Kayl thinks that it's going to be a ninja invasion (there are 3245 ninjas in Panel 5. Look more closelier) but they come to an agreement that nobility are very powerful individuals. Not powerful as in "I can obliterate cities with a signature" powerful as in "I can obliterate cities with my fists."

I added 3 extra panels to hopefully make it slightly less nonsensical as well as a minor text bubble edit in panel 6. Comic 384.

Comic 385 is up. Remember those 6 panels that were almost 384 that I mentioned before? Here they are.

Alternate Comic 384

Q? Q? C?

[memnarch]

384 is much improved by the addition.

385, second to last panel, what's-his-face looks like he came to a complete stop before hitting black blob god. Did you mess around with trying to make an Action shot?

[Emperor Ing]

Some fight scenes are easier to draw than others. Think of it as an action montage.

Comic 386 is up. How could this happen? D:

Oh, right. I had a lot of fun making this one, and I was on a roll.

Questions? Comments? Critique?

[memnarch]

Nice comic.

Missing the mouth full of something in the first panel though.

[Volthawk]

Some fight scenes are easier to draw than others. Think of it as an action montage.

Comic 386 is up. How could this happen? D:

Oh, right. I had a lot of fun making this one, and I was on a roll.

Questions? Comments? Critique?

Dammit I want that spell

[Emperor Ing]

I've destroyed mountains, supercharged magic missile, and have gigantic laser beams and you want the spell that summons xbox 360 controllers?

Comic 387 is up. Having too much fun here. Horray for filler!

...might wanna update the archives soon.

Questions? Comments? Critique?