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    Page 122, 6th panel, black speech-bubble: "arcane" mis-spelled.
    Page 159 or 160 (File name 159-1.png), panel 4, Tall guy's speech bubble : "wit" should be "wait".
    Panel 6 : Extra line appearing to cross outsome of the words in a speech bubble.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DracoDei View Post
    Page 122, 6th panel, black speech-bubble: "arcane" mis-spelled.
    Not an error. "Arcaea" is what I use as the Noun form of "Arcane Magic" without using "Arcane Magic."

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    Page 159 or 160 (File name 159-1.png), panel 4, Tall guy's speech bubble : "wit" should be "wait".
    Noted, fixed.
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    Page 166, Panel 9, top speech bubble (by lizard to robot) : Just seems grammatically garbled.

    169 and 170 you have the first shadow thing attacking getting shot in the gap between these two pages, which is a bit odd... like there is a page missing or something...

    Page 178, Panel 7, Red on black bubble: should be "better and better", not "petter and better".

    Page 179, Panel 9, second white on black bubble: As near as I can tell this says that "Your intellegence is much bigger than your intellegence"... which doesn't seem right.

    Page 185, Panels 7, speech bubble: Should be "trouble"
    Panel 9, speech bubble: Should be "braced", not "praced"

    Page 188, Panel 3, speech bubble: Blank (or is that just supposed to be Torn zoning out?)
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    Keep 'em coming. I'll hold up on fixing them until I (somehow) get the next comic done, but i'd prefer to know of all the grammatical problems from Comic 1 onward en masse.

    And let me just say I do appreciate what you're doing. I'm pretty sure you'd rather be doing some homebrewing or giving DnD newbies some advice (yes, I do float around the Roleplaying and Homebrewing forums) but still, I do appreciate it.
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    Edited in some more in the previous post,.
    As for what Iwould rather be doing, I see this the same as PEACHing someone's homebrew approximately. My best friend does a bunch of comics http://ottercomics.taur.net , and I read a bunch of others, so helping out with them isn't something I am un-used to.
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    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/l...orIng/TMA1.png Second to last panel: "I" should be "is" I think.


    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/l...orIng/TMA5.png 9th panel: Try "...turning yourself into diced meat".

    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/l...rIng/218-1.png , 3rd panel: You have part of the white on black speech bubble going over the front of the black on white speech bubble.


    Page 221 and 222 : No hints what was on that statement?

    Page 230, Panel 3: triangular part of speech bubble not filled in.

    Page 242, Panel 8: triangular part of speech bubble not filled in.

    Page 249, Panel 2, upper speech bubble: Should be "ate" not "at"
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    Page 261, Panel 9, Speech Bubble: End of sentence has many errors. Should be "going to be in the battle" or "is in the battle", not "gong is in the brattle". Never mind, this is probably intentional now that I read on.

    Page 262, Panel 14?, Speech Bubble: "flashback" not "lashback"

    Page 264, Panel 11: Words not enclosed in speech bubble... probably not worth fixing.
    Panel 12: "barbaric" (I think), certainly not "barberic".
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    The non-enclosed text is an error, hopefully I can fix it later today or maybe tomorrow

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    Somehow, I agree that simpler is better.

    I don't fully understand it, but good comic anyway. I loved the "surviving decapitation becoming mainstream".
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    i enjoyed that comic! keep it up!
    it's not a master peice, but I drew it

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    The respected comics have all been fixed. Anything that hasn't been fixed is either intentional, or is the "petter and better!" comment (It's a classic, what can I say? ), or hasn't been listed.

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    *twitch, twitch* Mem needs his WTwU fix.....
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    I'm trying, but time constraints are really making it tricky. I'll see if I can have one by friday.
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    That's alright. Take your time.
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    Fortunately I found a good amount of time, and was able to get it done on Thursday.


    Comic 290 is up. In case you're wondering, the triumvirate of plots is over, and we're following only the Battle for Eternus plotline. I was trying to think of something for the Shas'O Xeno plotline, but I was coming on empty, and I realized the Rand plotline could end well where it was.

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    Heh. Rand had it coming. Gonna eventually fail sometime.
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    So I had this idea for a comic floating around in my head for 2 weeks now, so I made it.

    It's probably only funny to some people, especially those familiar with some of the grittier details of Warhammer 40k fluff, or Tactical Genius.

    Anyways, Tactical Genius. In the Extras section.

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    I don't get the setting, but it's alright.
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    Again, its a bit of an inside joke but I liked it.

    for those who don't get it...
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    Everything you wanna know about Warmaster Failbaddon And he has no arms. Likely a casualty of the 13th black crusade.

    And Ursarkar Creed is Failbaddon's arch nemesis. He's an Imperial Guard general and the supreme commander of the armed forces of the planet Cadia. He is most noted for being extremely manly and being able to sneak 1 mile tall walkers behind enemy lines without anyone noticing due to Tactical Genius.

    this pic best illustrates it.


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    Text mis-spoken in frame 5, I think.
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    aww, poor sad princess marny. good comic!
    it's not a master peice, but I drew it

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    No visible errors I could find in that comic.

    Anyways, Comic 292 is up.

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    In comic 291, frame 5, the text at the top should either be Rand's or in Princess's accent.
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    Ah there it is, you probably should've been more specific a bit earlier.

    Fix'd
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    Gah!

    293 is up

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    Yup. If his abilities are suppressed, that would mean that those skeleton wing things actually grew out of him yes? Or is that a lie, given that the soldier's head popped?
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    that's not actually unlike some of the dumb disputes that happen around my school...now if only i could blow people's heads up!

    good comic!
    it's not a master peice, but I drew it

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    Skeletal wings aren't his only mutation, he has 3-toed feet similar to Rand, claws (Which due to the art style can't be depicted), and fangs, as well as super strength, speed, and stamina, and psyker powers nearly on par with The Emperor. (God Emperor of Mankind not The 4 armed Emperor).

    Comic 294 is up. I particularly enjoyed making this comic for several reasons. I especially like the way the custom Ridley Head sprite in panel 8 came out.

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    Ethanol = sawdust?

    Also, nice bar details.
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    Ethanol = sawdust?
    Sawdust is used to clean vomit . Eliminate the odor.

    Nice comic.
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