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2009-07-06, 12:50 AM (ISO 8601)
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The ShadowStone Gang
Most recent comic: 8
Part one: The ride of their lives
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In this OoTS like webcomic, A band of four misfits [Malde ShadowSkull, Quill Dolflag, Kelin ShadowBow, and Skit Uls] Team up to go and kill stuff! And get some XP!
Comments are welcome!
Any Cameo requests will be Strongly considered, so probably yes!
Facebook Group is hereLast edited by chef781; 2009-11-19 at 01:02 AM.
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2009-07-08, 09:27 AM (ISO 8601)
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Alright, I've decided that a second post should have bios, whereas the first should have the actual comics, to prevent too much length.
so:
Warning! Image Intensive!
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Malde ShadowSkull
Age 121
Sex:No- MALE
Class: Wizard (Necromancy)
Alignment: LE?
Bio: His Mother died while he was at the tender age of 48, He went in to Necromancy to try to bring her back, but, realizing it was futile, continued to study Necromancy. He found, after his dad died, in a small box in his dad's office, A necklace with some draconic text written on it, and wanted to fulfill his father's legacy. It is unknown if he is in any relationships currently, but doubted due to his obsession with death.
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Skit Uls
Age: 101
Sex: Male
Class: Rogue
Alignment: None of our business
Bio: He was an old friend of Malde's, and he knew Malde's father. When he heard about Malde(He sometimes calls him 'Mal')'s quest, he just couldn't resist. He has gotten in trouble many times by the PeaceKeepers(Police), and has been sent multiple times to 'Watched House Arrest'(At Malde's house). He has stayed with Malde ever since, for no reason he admits. If it's due to lack of anywhere else to go, or to the way he sees Malde.(Maybe as a father figure?)
He still Keeps with him, no matter what.
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Kelin ShadowBow
Age: 20
Sex: Male
Alignment: CG
Class: Ranger
Bio: He was a farmer's son, and was bored with his life. every day, it was, work, work, eat, more work. Finally, he broke the cycle by taking occasional trips into the woods to hunt, and just to shoot. After 'Bowing-and-Arrowing' for a few years, he finally left, simply promising that he would someday return to finish his duties. To this day, he has yet to fulfill his promise, only due to the fact that he thinks there are greater things out there than farming.
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Age:31
Sex: Female
Alignment:NG
Class: Fighter/Barbarian
Bio: Quill lived in the small town that Malde did. She didn't really have a family, so she would just go place to place, with no real sense in life. After an "Encounter" with Malde, she started rethinking her life. She then began disciplining herself, hoping it would make her that much better. She will often go weeks without talking, and won't give a reason. Some say it's to prove her discipline to herself, but no one really knows why.
Supporting cast
SpoilerComing soon!
Last edited by chef781; 2009-11-13 at 12:02 AM.
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2009-07-08, 09:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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Cool! I'll be following this.
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2009-07-08, 09:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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Okay let'S start with the art:
I think a little more variety in the expressions would be useful, also if you just moved the eyes of each character a little more in the direction they are facing it would stop looking like they are constantly staring at the viewer.
And last but not least the bad guy's tattoo is absolutely out of place.
As for storytelling: It would improve if the characters were talking a little more. Something that makes you realize why they are walking around and where they are going or even just some small-talk that let's you get to know them better.
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2009-07-08, 09:59 AM (ISO 8601)
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Alright, Thanks, guys, I will make note.
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2009-07-08, 10:12 AM (ISO 8601)
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Here's a little honest criticism:
In my opinion, this comic has nothing that sets it apart from the thousand OotS clones in the fan comic subforum. A story about a bunch of guys killing things in a D&D game world is something that is absolutely overdone. What I suggest to you is invent a decent plot and try, minimise the D&D references and make the character something other than race and class.
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2009-07-08, 11:31 AM (ISO 8601)
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There are 011 types of people in this world. People who understand binary, people who don't, and people who tend to read it backwards.
90% of all statistics are made up. Put this in your sig if you make up statistics.
The ShadowStone Gang!
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2009-07-08, 08:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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2009-07-09, 12:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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point. Sell, I'm still working. So, It'll be a bit faster. I was looking back at Failing Saves. They didn't really have very much plot either, Although they did have more. Well, just be patient.
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2009-07-09, 11:03 PM (ISO 8601)
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Comic Four is out!
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2009-07-10, 09:29 PM (ISO 8601)
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Comic Five Is Out!!
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2009-07-26, 11:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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[Sorry for triple post, but my readers dont always post.
Comic Six is out!!!
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2009-07-31, 11:37 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'am interested... I'll stay tuned for a bit.
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2009-08-18, 11:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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New Comic!!!
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2009-11-19, 01:05 AM (ISO 8601)
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Graag! Sorry for double post, but comic 8 is out! Also, check the facebook for details on why the town looks like that...
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