Page 9 of 34 FirstFirst 12345678910111213141516171819 ... LastLast
Results 241 to 270 of 1007
  1. - Top - End - #241
    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    Felyndiira's Avatar

    Join Date
    Mar 2009
    Location
    Here.

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    This is a little concept/pre-plan for Viola, a character in an upcoming fancomic. I intended her to be a young child - probably around 11 or so - with a bit of a bleaker outlook on life due to circumstances. The only thing I'm having trouble with is the "child" part, so I'm looking for ideas on how I could make the character, well, seem a bit less mature and more innocent, without making her too much so (little edits, adjustments in proportions, etc. I'm okay with going off of OotS style a little).



    There's also something that I dislike about the hair. I wanted to make a child-friendly hairstyle without relying on pigtails or side ponytails, although the result ended up looking a bit strange. I'm trying a few ways to fix it without changing hairstyles entirely at the moment, though I'm not getting very good results.

    EDIT: Concept Art of Viola. As you can see, the avatar looks really off, and that's been bugging me for quite a while - not really sure how to fix the problem.
    Last edited by Felyndiira; 2010-03-01 at 02:30 AM.

  2. - Top - End - #242
    Troll in the Playground
     
    Herpestidae's Avatar

    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    By the sword
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Felyndiira View Post
    This is a little concept/pre-plan for Viola, a character in an upcoming fancomic. I intended her to be a young child - probably around 11 or so - with a bit of a bleaker outlook on life due to circumstances. The only thing I'm having trouble with is the "child" part, so I'm looking for ideas on how I could make the character, well, seem a bit less mature and more innocent, without making her too much so (little edits, adjustments in proportions, etc. I'm okay with going off of OotS style a little).


    To make a child, scale the body down about 2/3, but leave the head the same size. Following that, group the whole thing (head included) and scale it down once more (look at Haley in This Comic)

    As for hairstyles, maybe go for braids?
    Last edited by Herpestidae; 2010-03-01 at 11:22 AM.

    Most of my posts are done by mobile. Expect typos.

    Recruiting for M&M 3E Avatar: The Last Airbender AU game

  3. - Top - End - #243
    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    MethosH's Avatar

    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Behind the Wall of Sleep
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Felyndiira View Post
    You should ask yourself what make us see the difference between a child and an adult. I think they are, in the particular case of OotS-style: Size; the head proportion; the feet proportion and lack of muscles and breast.

    By the way... Her shoes are a little blur
    It's BACK!

  4. - Top - End - #244
    Titan in the Playground
     
    Emperor Ing's Avatar

    Join Date
    May 2007
    Location
    Ameritopia
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by The Q View Post
    So there will be two Nintento inspired comics around here?

    Whatever, I'm looking forward to it. Anything you can say about it at this point? Plot? Characters?

    Also, what do you think of my most recent art update with Peach's Castle? Anything else I can improve?
    1) Yes, there will be. But don't expect it anytime soon, say, for at least a year.
    2) Not really, i'm debating between several other characters from elseware in the series, like Dark Samus and Armstrong Houston, all I know is that Samus won't be the main character. I'll probably just do what I do with WTwU's plot and add characters on a basis of necessity.
    3) *looks for it* Ah there it is. Yes, looks pretty good. I kinda liked the way the goombas looked before but their crab-walking ingame definitely leaves little room for realism. The koopas still look awkward, I recommend increasing the curvature on their beaks/snouts/mouths/whatever.

    Other than that looking good.
    A Civil Discussion
    Spoiler
    Show

    Quote Originally Posted by Blackbird97
    Good, I like the quote for you do indeed frighten people beyond words.
    I make avatars. Want one? Yes, i'm accepting requests ATM.

    Randomizer, Overgod of Chaos by Vuilon

  5. - Top - End - #245
    Titan in the Playground
     
    Silverraptor's Avatar

    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    A nice, sparkly place.
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Unfortunately, it appears I put this out on the bottom of a page and everyone missed it. So here's a repost of what I'm initiating.

    Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
    I would like to initiate a contest for my comic, Idiosyncrasy. Anyone who can develop a unique style uniform for a black op covert of the trogodytes shall recieve a cameo appearance in my comic in the future. They will, however, need to pm the character they want the cameo appearance with.

    Contest will last until I need to use the uniform Black op Trogodytes. (So you guys have to guess when. Pretty much, when it seems that they are getting closer, that's when you guys need to step up.)

    Hope to see you all compete.

  6. - Top - End - #246
    Ogre in the Playground
     
    Maximum Zersk's Avatar

    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Canada, Eh?
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
    Unfortunately, it appears I put this out on the bottom of a page and everyone missed it. So here's a repost of what I'm initiating.
    I didn't. I just didn't find anything to say.

    A webcomic by Sahaar and I, Shadow of Fire. Read it!

    Giant in the Playground Worldbuilding Project.

    Avatar by James Cameron. Or Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko. Oh wait, I mean Tom Siddell.

    Spoiler
    Show

    Quote Originally Posted by Klose_the_Sith View Post
    Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
    Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.


    Spoiler
    Show




  7. - Top - End - #247
    Banned
     
    Dvandemon's Avatar

    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    San Diego, California
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
    Unfortunately, it appears I put this out on the bottom of a page and everyone missed it. So here's a repost of what I'm initiating.
    It takes time for people to deliberate, be patient

    Anyone now how to make squinty eyes of suspicion OoTS style?

  8. - Top - End - #248
    Banned
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    La Roux
    Gender
    Female

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class


  9. - Top - End - #249
    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    Rae Artemi's Avatar

    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Ohio
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by The Q View Post
    So there will be two Nintento inspired comics around here?

    Whatever, I'm looking forward to it. Anything you can say about it at this point? Plot? Characters?

    Also, what do you think of my most recent art update with Peach's Castle? Anything else I can improve?
    Um... Q... *points to siggeh*
    I made comics!
    Spoiler
    Show



    [/URL]
    Crae is the bestest daddy,
    I make avatars, all you have to do is ask, and I'll do it if I can.
    My Awards
    I've got a Formspring, ask me questions if you want.

  10. - Top - End - #250
    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    MethosH's Avatar

    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Behind the Wall of Sleep
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
    Unfortunately, it appears I put this out on the bottom of a page and everyone missed it. So here's a repost of what I'm initiating.
    Fear not! I plan on joining this contest.
    It's BACK!

  11. - Top - End - #251
    Ogre in the Playground
     
    Darklord Bright's Avatar

    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    Wellington, New Zealand
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Nintendo-inspired comics aren't exactly a new and exciting concept.

  12. - Top - End - #252
    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    Felyndiira's Avatar

    Join Date
    Mar 2009
    Location
    Here.

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by MethosHazara View Post
    You should ask yourself what make us see the difference between a child and an adult. I think they are, in the particular case of OotS-style: Size; the head proportion; the feet proportion and lack of muscles and breast.

    By the way... Her shoes are a little blur
    Thanks for the feedback, Methos and Herpeste ^^.

    The character was supposed to be more of an in-between of a child and an adult; I wanted her to look a bit younger than an average adult, although taller and older than child Haley. The hair, though, I scrapped and basically redid from scratch, resulting in the following:



    Any further suggestions would be greatly appreciated ^^.

  13. - Top - End - #253
    Ettin in the Playground
     
    Keveak's Avatar

    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Where we lay our scene
    Gender
    Male2Female

    smile Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Felyndiira View Post
    Thanks for the feedback, Methos and Herpeste ^^.

    The character was supposed to be more of an in-between of a child and an adult; I wanted her to look a bit younger than an average adult, although taller and older than child Haley. The hair, though, I scrapped and basically redid from scratch, resulting in the following:



    Any further suggestions would be greatly appreciated ^^.
    Shouldn't she have arms?

    I think that the charter would look More like a child if it had bigger eyes (cartoon children have big eyes for this very reason) but that's just my opinion.
    It's good
    Treasured Quotes
    Spoiler
    Show

    Emphatic shirts.

    Quote Originally Posted by SiuiS View Post

    At first, it was the smiley faces and the mannerisms. Then, it was the infernal magpie. It struck a chord. A cutely fiendish, macabre chord.

    An then I saw Keveak in the sorting hat and you are just the cutest thing when you want to be. My gosh look at that. It's squee-inducing.

  14. - Top - End - #254
    Troll in the Playground
     
    Herpestidae's Avatar

    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    By the sword
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    By the way, I need a D&D guy familiar with gestalt rules to collaborate on my comic with me. Any takers?

    Most of my posts are done by mobile. Expect typos.

    Recruiting for M&M 3E Avatar: The Last Airbender AU game

  15. - Top - End - #255
    Titan in the Playground
     
    Silverraptor's Avatar

    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    A nice, sparkly place.
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Herpestidae View Post
    By the way, I need a D&D guy familiar with gestalt rules to collaborate on my comic with me. Any takers?
    Eh. I don't know the difference between gestalt or otherwise. But I do know DnD rules for 3.5

  16. - Top - End - #256
    Troll in the Playground
     
    Herpestidae's Avatar

    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    By the sword
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
    Eh. I don't know the difference between gestalt or otherwise. But I do know DnD rules for 3.5
    Good enough, because I have some homebrew feats and such I want to run by someone, else everyone starts calling my characters munchkins.

    Most of my posts are done by mobile. Expect typos.

    Recruiting for M&M 3E Avatar: The Last Airbender AU game

  17. - Top - End - #257
    Ettin in the Playground
     
    Bayar's Avatar

    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Herpestidae View Post
    By the way, I need a D&D guy familiar with gestalt rules to collaborate on my comic with me. Any takers?
    I know the gestalt rules. And more random D&D 3.5 knowledge...like builds and funny ftuff like the spelunker.

  18. - Top - End - #258
    Troll in the Playground
     
    Herpestidae's Avatar

    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    By the sword
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Bayar View Post
    I know the gestalt rules. And more random D&D 3.5 knowledge...like builds and funny ftuff like the spelunker.
    Excellent. I'll keep in touch with you then.

    Most of my posts are done by mobile. Expect typos.

    Recruiting for M&M 3E Avatar: The Last Airbender AU game

  19. - Top - End - #259
    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    Felyndiira's Avatar

    Join Date
    Mar 2009
    Location
    Here.

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Keveak View Post
    Shouldn't she have arms?

    I think that the charter would look More like a child if it had bigger eyes (cartoon children have big eyes for this very reason) but that's just my opinion.
    It's good
    Thanks for the reply, Kev ^^.

    The reason that she doesn't have arms is because it's a template; I'll add arms when I arrange the character into the comic. About the eyes, though - I actually tried giving her bigger eyes before, but it looked admittedly a bit creepy, so I ended up keeping the smaller eyes.


  20. - Top - End - #260
    Ogre in the Playground
     
    Maximum Zersk's Avatar

    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Canada, Eh?
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Here are the main characters.



    How do they look?

    A webcomic by Sahaar and I, Shadow of Fire. Read it!

    Giant in the Playground Worldbuilding Project.

    Avatar by James Cameron. Or Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko. Oh wait, I mean Tom Siddell.

    Spoiler
    Show

    Quote Originally Posted by Klose_the_Sith View Post
    Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
    Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.


    Spoiler
    Show




  21. - Top - End - #261
    Barbarian in the Playground
     
    icastflare!'s Avatar

    Join Date
    Nov 2009
    Location
    The Divide
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Maximum Zersk View Post
    Here are the main characters.



    How do they look?
    I love the look of the one in the middle, do they have names.
    Avatar of a Drow priestess by Teutonic Knight.

    This is where I put my writings. Want to take a look?

  22. - Top - End - #262
    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    MethosH's Avatar

    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Behind the Wall of Sleep
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Maximum Zersk View Post
    Here are the main characters.



    How do they look?
    they look like I could hug and love then forever and ever!
    Last edited by MethosH; 2010-03-03 at 10:07 AM.
    It's BACK!

  23. - Top - End - #263
    Ettin in the Playground
     
    Keveak's Avatar

    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Where we lay our scene
    Gender
    Male2Female

    smile Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Felyndiira View Post
    Thanks for the reply, Kev ^^.

    The reason that she doesn't have arms is because it's a template; I'll add arms when I arrange the character into the comic. About the eyes, though - I actually tried giving her bigger eyes before, but it looked admittedly a bit creepy, so I ended up keeping the smaller eyes.

    Makes sense.
    Strangely I can't see why that would look creepy, but it hardly matters, it's good both ways

    Quote Originally Posted by Maximum Zersk View Post
    Here are the main characters.



    How do they look?
    You spend all that time on figuring out how to make a female feline and not one of the main characters are one?

    They're very good, though.
    Treasured Quotes
    Spoiler
    Show

    Emphatic shirts.

    Quote Originally Posted by SiuiS View Post

    At first, it was the smiley faces and the mannerisms. Then, it was the infernal magpie. It struck a chord. A cutely fiendish, macabre chord.

    An then I saw Keveak in the sorting hat and you are just the cutest thing when you want to be. My gosh look at that. It's squee-inducing.

  24. - Top - End - #264
    Ogre in the Playground
     
    Maximum Zersk's Avatar

    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Canada, Eh?
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by icastflare! View Post
    I love the look of the one in the middle, do they have names.
    I still have to pick out names.

    Quote Originally Posted by MethosHazara View Post
    they look like I could hug and love then forever and ever!


    Quote Originally Posted by Keveak View Post
    You spend all that time on figuring out how to make a female feline and not one of the main characters are one?

    They're very good, though.
    I needed the female body template for the beginning of the first chapter. Also could get handy for later on.

    Alright, I'm going to work on the first page of the comic now. The page lay-out is going to be like an average graphic novel, though, so I'll see how that turns out.

    Thanks for all the help guys!

    A webcomic by Sahaar and I, Shadow of Fire. Read it!

    Giant in the Playground Worldbuilding Project.

    Avatar by James Cameron. Or Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko. Oh wait, I mean Tom Siddell.

    Spoiler
    Show

    Quote Originally Posted by Klose_the_Sith View Post
    Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
    Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.


    Spoiler
    Show




  25. - Top - End - #265
    Banned
     
    Dvandemon's Avatar

    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    San Diego, California
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Can anyone tell me if an assassin can be a Lich? I believe I heard that somewhere on the RPG threads

  26. - Top - End - #266
    Ettin in the Playground
     
    Bayar's Avatar

    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    As long as he can create the phylactery, yes.

    Of course, the DM can make a level 1 human commoner lich if he wants, because he does not have to abide by the rules if he doesn't feel like it.

  27. - Top - End - #267
    Troll in the Playground
     
    Herpestidae's Avatar

    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    By the sword
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Okay, how do draw a hood/cloak? I find it very frustrating.

    Most of my posts are done by mobile. Expect typos.

    Recruiting for M&M 3E Avatar: The Last Airbender AU game

  28. - Top - End - #268
    Dwarf in the Playground
     
    Hyoumu Yau's Avatar

    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Quote Originally Posted by Herpestidae View Post
    Okay, how do draw a hood/cloak? I find it very frustrating.
    Look in the Illustrator Help Thread in the Arts and Crafts section, I think there was a guide for hoods and cloaks there somewhere....


    Be nice, give him a hug. Look how much he want's it!

    Avatar and Signature were made by me

  29. - Top - End - #269
    Troll in the Playground
     
    CrimsonAngel's Avatar

    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    Texas
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Check out the guy in the 4th panel.
    Spoiler
    Show
    ____

  30. - Top - End - #270
    Titan in the Playground
     
    Silverraptor's Avatar

    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    A nice, sparkly place.
    Gender
    Male

    Default Re: Our Comic Lab in the Playground: An experimentation class

    Hey Methos, can you add my contest to the first post?

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •