Kasanip's Sketchbook

[memnarch]

He seem like annoying character with such a song

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XD
He certainly does look annoying there.

It is random because of no inspiration
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Well, random looks nice.


...I've also been thinking about something I'd read a while ago. Part of it said that there isn't much constructive criticism on the internet. Do you want people saying what could be improved on your drawings and sketches?

[Kasanip]

XD
He certainly does look annoying there.



Well, random looks nice.


...I've also been thinking about something I'd read a while ago. Part of it said that there isn't much constructive criticism on the internet. Do you want people saying what could be improved on your drawings and sketches?

Maybe I think 'improve' is more easy if I try sketch for more than 5:00 sketch. <(><)>
Having no experience, such is the laziness of my drawing. If you have help and advice please tell me clearly.
m(_ _)m

[Terraoblivion]

That last picture looks like Kamome is cosplaying as Isara from Valkyria Chronicles. Can't claim to be unsatisfied with that.

[Prime32]

He seem like annoying character with such a song

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Maybe to remind of Black Star somehow.

It's actually the theme of the final boss.

[memnarch]

Okay then;
Chrono

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His hand could use some work, fingers are usually the same size and then index/pointer/first finger is too wide at the base on his right hand.

The left hand is rather messy, but as it is a 5:00 sketch, it has more than enough detail in it. Pretty good.

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A preliminary sketch? It is very light and looks like the base of some of your other pictures so..... there's really nothing wrong so far.

Baruise

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The head and shoulders look nicely drawn.

I can't tell where the arms are and the waist and lower chest could be cleaner (fewer lines).

[Kasanip]

thank you for the advice.
I think to improve, it will stop of 5:00 sketch for now. To make longer ones only I think. Of course of music sketch ideas, I will try harder too

That last picture looks like Kamome is cosplaying as Isara from Valkyria Chronicles. Can't claim to be unsatisfied with that.

Yes, to start as a Kamome sketch, but the music changed and such a change in the sketch happened. But Kamome 'sdesign was with influence of this game art and character.

It's actually the theme of the final boss.

It must be an annoying final boss!



Maybe to be already seen, but to make new avatars for Purple Rose and me, of Takara and Erima.

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To be a favorite song, such a wish I wonder too and so to sketch heartfeltly a wistful prayer.
「私の太陽」

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I want to know the answers and to finish this picture.

[memnarch]

A nice sounding song; had to make due with a g-translate, but the lyrics look nice anyway.


That picture looks much better!

One thing, hands don't quite look like that. There's too much flesh next to the smallest finger.
Oh, and the clothing outline could be a little darker.


The avatars, something strikes me as being off on Erima's portrait, but I'm not sure what it is. Maybe the back.



Here's a lovely piano piece. 7 minutes long as well. If you want an extra challenge, try drawing someone/something other than Remilia.

[Kasanip]

it is busy with school, so having things to show has been slow.

Tomoya sketch

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Strangely, to be drawn as a farewell picture thinking this RP was finished, but after sketching, suddenly it was alive again. So now it just has lost that meaning, so I can't finish or correct it. Maybe that is not a bad thing, since I don't like losing characters.

It is a project idea I thought of. Often playing 大富豪 with friends, it was an idea to make playing cards with characters. I have reasons for which card choice too I think.

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Why is Kamome such a 2? Maybe to seem most weak but actually very strong. But I think maybe this style isn't good for a card. What do you think?

Here's a lovely piano piece. 7 minutes long as well. If you want an extra challenge, try drawing someone/something other than Remilia.

I am sorry, even if it is TAM, I don't like this song very much. I tried to draw it several times, but only became sleepy. I should sleep more.

[memnarch]

Tomoya sketch; hang on to the art until the game really is finished?


Game; Google says that's called "Big Spender". Somehow that doesn't seem right. Could I get a link to the rules, japanese, english, or something else, to read about it?


Music; Don't worry about it; it's fine if a piece of music is no good for drawing to.

[kamikasei]

The card: you could maybe make the border more ornate, or do the picture on it in a playing-card style rather than normal lines and colours. Depends on the effect you're looking for.

Game; Google says that's called "Big Spender". Somehow that doesn't seem right. Could I get a link to the rules, japanese, english, or something else, to read about it?

Daifugou.

[Prime32]

I am reminded of something.

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Slight errors, this was before I made the program

[memnarch]

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Daifugou.

Ah thanks!

[Kasanip]

To try making card style again, I tried to use the advice. It is very strange I think, but maybe with more practice it can become better.

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Tomoya

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A surprising ending for her story maybe.

[kamikasei]

To try making card style again, I tried to use the advice. It is very strange I think, but maybe with more practice it can become better.

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That works surprisingly well. I thought you'd have to change your style enough that it wouldn't be recognizably yours any more in order to get the look down, but that feels very playing-card-y while still being clearly your handiwork.

[memnarch]

Would be interesting to see a whole deck made.

[Terraoblivion]

It would.

I also have to ask. Is Buddhist imagery traditionally associated with the ace in Japan? Or did you just want to draw...actually i don't know enough about Buddhist imagery to tell if it is a saint, a Bodhisattva or a Buddha, just that it looks Buddhist.

[Fri]

Isn't it actually Mir from heroes of the myth game?

[Raz_Fox]

Isn't it actually Mir from heroes of the myth game?

'Tis. If that's not Mir, I'll eat someone else's hat.

By and by, Kasanip, that is a fine card you've got there. I like it a lot! It looks slightly scratchy, but that doesn't detract too much from the overall picture.

[Terraoblivion]

Maybe, but she's still in a pose common in Buddhist art.

[Kasanip]

It would.

I also have to ask. Is Buddhist imagery traditionally associated with the ace in Japan? Or did you just want to draw...actually i don't know enough about Buddhist imagery to tell if it is a saint, a Bodhisattva or a Buddha, just that it looks Buddhist.

Ace card is not with picture I think or of Buddhist meaning. But it is Ace of Heart, so 'most high card'. If I draw my characters to be Ace of Heart, it must be Mir.
And Mir is the Goddess of Wisdom of Heroes of Myth. Very much she is a Buddhist-like character I think. Always to add hidden things, I am happy it is seen.
Maybe of some hand, it is symbols too. But to take two and make a mix. To think now, maybe it is very much with such an image without thinking, but it too is my thought of her. Her symbols are 半説法印と来迎印.


To try a 'watercolors style' and self portrait.

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To try to create a 'setting' and new characters. I am very bad to create original settings.

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[Kaiser Omnik]

I find the last one pretty and inspiring, for a sketch; it makes you want to learn more about them and the whole story behind them. You're being too hard on yourself Kasanip!

[Kasanip]

Thank you Omnik. I like the new characters, but I want to make a comic. But no good 'story' for comic.

Because fall, and suddenly being in good spirit, yet recently being 'Autumnal Equinox Day' and so 'Higan' suddenly a return to another world.
Maybe also to practice to make 'card' like other (having trouble with style).

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Suddenly full of color again, I have a good feeling.

[Fri]

It's... it's amazing. You might notice that I don't praise that much, but... this one truly deserves it. Totally love the lineart and coloring style. I wish I could draw as good as you.

[Prime32]

Pretty...

Though my first thought was "When did Rei Ayanami start appearing in Coca-Cola ads?"

[BisectedBrioche]

I like the style with the thicker lines. Nice colours too.

[memnarch]

Oh hey, how did I manage to miss the new pictures?

Umbrella girl; lovely choice of medium. Watercolors are pretty.

The new characters; they look fairly unique to me.

Youmu; Nice to see colorful images again.

[Terraoblivion]

That's one awesome Youmu, showing off just why a danmaku fight would be a great thing to watch if it really happened. From a bunker at least, even if they are non-lethal, they still probably hurt.

She does have some similarities to Rei in her appearance. I think it is the hair color, which is a shade more blueish than usual.

[Prime32]

She does have some similarities to Rei in her appearance. I think it is the hair color, which is a shade more blueish than usual.

That and Youmu is typically depicted with her bangs gathering at the sides rather than the centre, with their tips clipped. It still falls well within artistic license (I've seen fanart which deviates much further).

What program did you use for this pic?

[Silverraptor]

Okay, that pictures deserves two silver claws waaaaaay up!

[Prime32]

Okay, that pictures deserves two silver claws waaaaaay up!

There is also a man in your av. Why is he not raising his limbs?