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    Decided I would try to make a webcomic. Here it is.

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    I don't get the... punchline?

    Also, that character looks a little too much like V for my taste.

    EDIT: He's also much thinner in two panels, what's up with that?
    Last edited by Cizak; 2010-02-20 at 12:57 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cizak View Post
    IEDIT: He's also much thinner in two panels, what's up with that?
    I think it's the OP squashing panels to make them fit in a single row.

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    No punchline....yet. Still thinking of ideas for the plot.
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    So... why was he angry?
    Quote Originally Posted by T-O-E View Post
    MAJOR SPOILERS. Seriously!
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    Black. 'The End' in white text.

    Don't say I didn't warn you.
    I won a thread. Am I pathetic to list that in my signture? Yes. Of course I am.

    Awesome avatar is awesome. And made by yldenfrei.

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    Too much like V with the outfit and hair style. Change it around a bit. And maybe make the Raven different in some way shape or form.
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    Could use some helpful critique for my avatar that I made. Please?

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    Oh hey, V decided to die hir hair.
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    Thanks for the suggestions, will put up revised in a bit. He's mad about the lack of plot in the first strip.
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