Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic

[Sahaar]

Fellow playgrounders, Maximum Zersk and Sahaar are proud to present:

The Shadow of Fire Webcomic!

A tale of two brave warriors who dare to take on a powerful Empire by themselves. Presented in OOTS-style format.

Thanks to Maximum Zersk for the art. Written by me.


Book 1

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1, Prologue

2, The bushes are a clue

3, Could be puberty

4, Share your WIS Modifier with us, oh great Tim

5, Believe it or not, there are Predator spoilers.

6, No food for you!

7, Not even if it was pretty with sugar on top

8, There's a joke hidden in here somewhere...

[Domochevsky]

...they banned fire, hm? Guess they're that evil.
(Odd transition from panel 1 to panel 2. "Yeah everything's going well. Oh wait, now it doesn't.")

[Sahaar]

Blame Zersk I take responsibilty for that. Oh, well. We're working on the next strips now, I promise they'll be at least slightly more interesting than the first one.

[Eric Tolle]

I think an empire that banned both magic and fire would be a pretty quickly self-correcting problem.

"I don't know why, but we keep losing to that small kingdom."
"You mean the one that has the metal armor and weapons, and cooked food, and magic?"
"Yeah, that one. I don't get it."

[Jokasti]

Will watch.

[Maximum Zersk]

Damn it, Sahaar. I was watching the Fancomic Sub-forum, waiting for you to put it up. And then you put it up here.

Yeah, I'm thinking about the fire thing. I sent him something about a whole bunch of things in the comic, so we'll see.

[Jokasti]

If it's OotS style, shouldn't it be in Fancomics?

[Maximum Zersk]

If it isn't hosted anywhere else, it should be in Fancomics.

And don't mind the soldier in panel three holding the sword in a wierd way. He's actually a lumberjack.

"I never wanted to be a soldier. I wanted to be a lumberjack!"

[Jokasti]

Don't forget to link in your signature

[Maximum Zersk]

Got it, thanks for reminding me.

[Domochevsky]

But link it in a way that doesn't contain a "&posted=1#post8643992" in the URL.

[Maximum Zersk]

But link it in a way that doesn't contain a "&posted=1#post8643992" in the URL.

Did it do that?

[Domochevsky]

Did it do that?

Yes, that's exactly what you did. (And still do.)

Just remove that part from the URL and you're good.

[Maximum Zersk]

'Kay, fixed it.

Still waiting for Sahaar to reply.

[Maximum Zersk]

'Kay, I finished page two.

Since it seems that Sahaar might not see it for a little, I'll post it here.

Page Two.

[Sahaar]

Chapter 2 added to the Archive.

[Domochevsky]

"The path says to go through here" ...? The paper/parchment mayhaps?

So... yeah, at least the names are descriptive, that's always a good thing, right?

[Arcanoi]

Shouldn't there be MORE tombstones in panel 2, rather than less >_>?

[Jokasti]

Shouldn't there be MORE tombstones in panel 2, rather than less >_>?

Those are houses, they have little roofs. Roofs? Is that the correct spelling?

[Sahaar]

No, yes it is.


Strip 3 is in the works.

[Ninjaman]

Nice comic, i watch gladly to see where you take it

[Maximum Zersk]

Strip 3 is in the works.

Indeedly it is.

Sorry, I was gone for the past few weeks. Comic should up soon.

By the by, how would we go about moving the thread to fancomics? Using the report thingie, right?

[Domochevsky]

I think so, yes. But is it actually a fancomic because it uses stick-type art?

Personally i'd rather have it stay here, so i can keep an eye on it. (i don't check the fancomic forum) >_>

[Maximum Zersk]

Well, basically any comic that's hosted one the website needs to be in the fancomics section. We could keep it here, but we'd need to host it off-site. I could do that, but I'd need to see if Sahaar's okay with that.

[Hopeless]

Looking good so far.

Looking forward to part 3.

[Maximum Zersk]

And page 3 is done.

Here it is!

So how is it?

[X2]

Great art.

[Maximum Zersk]

Why thank you.

I'm going to try to fix the blur problem. Don't know why it's doing that.

[Comet]

And there goes the fourth wall. It's almost like it's a thing on this website.

I like the writing. And the art.

[Sahaar]

I thank you :) Zersk does do good art, doesn't he?


Edit: New format, Chapter 3 added

Edit again: Chapter 4 ITWs.