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    There were many posible outcomes, this is one...

    Set 5 years after what would have been the end of ? Re-Animation shows what be came of the multiverse.

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    #0 is up guy's.
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    No offense, but I think that you are making the same mistakes that Herpestidae made. Read Combo-Platter and I think you might be able to make the comic better. Also, explain what is going on in the comic.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Darklord Xavez View Post
    explain what is going on in the comic.
    Ok. Well, Three universes collided with each other (Blue= Original ? plot, Red= The universe that the villain was from, Purple= A kind of "Axiom Nexus*" were the protectors of time and space are located.) These universes were destroyed but the shock wave from the explosion effected all surrounding universes, destroying some, others took some of the history from one or all of the other universes and making it part of it's own history thus forever changing it. This comic takes place 5 years after the explosion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nageto004 View Post
    Ok. Well, Three universes collided with each other (Blue= Original ? plot, Red= The universe that the villain was from, Purple= A kind of "Axiom Nexus*" were the protectors of time and space are located.) These universes were destroyed but the shock wave from the explosion effected all surrounding universes, destroying some, others took some of the history from one or all of the other universes and making it part of it's own history thus forever changing it. This comic takes place 5 years after the explosion.

    *Its from Transformers.
    As a tip, this is way too much information to fit into a six-panel comic. When you draw a comic, it's often a good idea to first make a rough sketch of it (a planning board, in other words) and review it to make sure that your viewers, armed with only the knowledge from prior comics, would be able to understand what's going on. Don't be afraid to use narrator speech to explain what's going on, especially in a prologue.

    Since OotS art is very simplified at times, it's vitally important that you convey enough information so that the reader can grasp enough understanding of what they're looking at.

    Otherwise, good work, and a nice introduction to a hopefully outstanding comic ^^.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nageto004 View Post
    Ok. Well, Three universes collided with each other (Blue= Original ? plot, Red= The universe that the villain was from, Purple= A kind of "Axiom Nexus*" were the protectors of time and space are located.) These universes were destroyed but the shock wave from the explosion effected all surrounding universes, destroying some, others took some of the history from one or all of the other universes and making it part of it's own history thus forever changing it. This comic takes place 5 years after the explosion.

    *Its from Transformers.
    This.

    That could be an entire story arc of epicness, a prologue if you will.

    In one comic it just looks like a confusing mess.

    Sorry for being harsh but I just believe it would be much more interesting if we got a few comics to explain what is going on and maybe even make us feel sorry for the lost universes
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    Yeah, I would recommend going with a far more simpler idea and only expand when you've established those facts in a way everybody can understand.

    Though since you're also the creator of ?, I guess we'll have to expect it to be confusing, don't we?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Keveak
    This.

    That could be an entire story arc of epicness, a prologue if you will.

    In one comic it just looks like a confusing mess.

    Sorry for being harsh but I just believe it would be much more interesting if we got a few comics to explain what is going on and maybe even make us feel sorry for the lost universes
    I never thought of that well I know what my weekend will be like now.

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    Though since you're also the creator of ?, I guess we'll have to expect it to be confusing, don't we?
    Not so much this time I know what I doing and Im stiking with it this time.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nageto004 View Post
    I never thought of that well I know what my weekend will be like now.



    Not so much this time I know what I doing and Im stiking with it this time.
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    sorry for not updating ment to before I went on vacation but forgot to.
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    Alright here is the first of 15 backstory comics.
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    -14 is up, I'll have to redo this one some time.
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    for #0 simple caption boxes might have helped explaining.

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    Nick, you do know that the reason your images aren't showing up is because you are linking to them in your gallery and not straight to the images, right?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rae Artemi View Post
    Nick, you do know that the reason your images aren't showing up is because you are linking to them in your gallery and not straight to the images, right?
    I keep trying to do that but it still wont show up, atleast on my computer.
    I got it now, my computer just hates to make things easy for me.
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    Kay' new one, I forgot how hard it is to get that hose in place for running.
    Also what do you think of the new skin tone?
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    NEW one is up.
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    At first, it was the smiley faces and the mannerisms. Then, it was the infernal magpie. It struck a chord. A cutely fiendish, macabre chord.

    An then I saw Keveak in the sorting hat and you are just the cutest thing when you want to be. My gosh look at that. It's squee-inducing.

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    New comic, also the planet n' flags
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    Übungsflugzeug Comedy gold. I wonder if spanish speakers will also get such a good chuckle out of these names.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Threeshades View Post
    Übungsflugzeug Comedy gold. I wonder if spanish speakers will also get such a good chuckle out of these names.
    Spanish speakers probably won't, considering that the non-German place names are written in Italian.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rae Artemi View Post
    Spanish speakers probably won't, considering that the non-German place names are written in Italian.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rae Artemi View Post
    Spanish speakers probably won't, considering that the non-German place names are written in Italian.
    it's all the same. Just like French and Belgian.

    Yeah but now that you're saying it, that's right. Gwersyll Anialwch looks welsh to me. Loken and Mogben I can't really identify.
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    Halb Land Zwei Fluss and Übungsflugzeug. Funny names for countries I think.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Threeshades View Post
    Loken and Mogben I can't really identify.
    Those are the only 2 that I came up with from the top of my head.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Threeshades View Post
    it's all the same. Just like French and Belgian.

    Yeah but now that you're saying it, that's right. Gwersyll Anialwch looks welsh to me. Loken and Mogben I can't really identify.
    Loken sounds kinda funny in Danish, but I doubt that was intended.

    Gwersyll Anialwch looks kind of like someone trying to talk with an entire burger in their mouth to me
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    At first, it was the smiley faces and the mannerisms. Then, it was the infernal magpie. It struck a chord. A cutely fiendish, macabre chord.

    An then I saw Keveak in the sorting hat and you are just the cutest thing when you want to be. My gosh look at that. It's squee-inducing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Keveak View Post
    Loken sounds kinda funny in Danish, but I doubt that was intended.

    Gwersyll Anialwch looks kind of like someone trying to talk with an entire burger in their mouth to me
    Trust me it's welsh. Wales is the only country where worship of the Old Ones and the use of their unspeakable language are openly embraced.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Threeshades View Post
    Trust me it's welsh.
    Yeah it is, it means "Desert Camp".
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    Quote Originally Posted by Threeshades View Post
    Trust me it's welsh. Wales is the only country where worship of the Old Ones and the use of their unspeakable language are openly embraced.
    The Old Ones are drunk (on goosewater, normal booze don't work on them), why do you think they haven't invaded yet? Thus why it sounds like someone talking Burger-talk, they likely were


    @^: Desert Camp? Odd name for a country, I'd say.

    Then again, I'm living in Dan's field of grass...

    I'm suspecting the namers were drunker than the Old Ones that day.
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    At first, it was the smiley faces and the mannerisms. Then, it was the infernal magpie. It struck a chord. A cutely fiendish, macabre chord.

    An then I saw Keveak in the sorting hat and you are just the cutest thing when you want to be. My gosh look at that. It's squee-inducing.

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