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2010-06-09, 10:53 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-06-10, 02:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
#0 is up guy's.
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2010-06-10, 03:37 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
No offense, but I think that you are making the same mistakes that Herpestidae made. Read Combo-Platter and I think you might be able to make the comic better. Also, explain what is going on in the comic.
Critiquefully,
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2010-06-10, 04:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
Ok. Well, Three universes collided with each other (Blue= Original ? plot, Red= The universe that the villain was from, Purple= A kind of "Axiom Nexus*" were the protectors of time and space are located.) These universes were destroyed but the shock wave from the explosion effected all surrounding universes, destroying some, others took some of the history from one or all of the other universes and making it part of it's own history thus forever changing it. This comic takes place 5 years after the explosion.
*Its from Transformers.Nageto004: your residential paranormal exterminator.
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2010-06-10, 04:44 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
As a tip, this is way too much information to fit into a six-panel comic. When you draw a comic, it's often a good idea to first make a rough sketch of it (a planning board, in other words) and review it to make sure that your viewers, armed with only the knowledge from prior comics, would be able to understand what's going on. Don't be afraid to use narrator speech to explain what's going on, especially in a prologue.
Since OotS art is very simplified at times, it's vitally important that you convey enough information so that the reader can grasp enough understanding of what they're looking at.
Otherwise, good work, and a nice introduction to a hopefully outstanding comic ^^.
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2010-06-10, 05:03 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
This.
That could be an entire story arc of epicness, a prologue if you will.
In one comic it just looks like a confusing mess.
Sorry for being harsh but I just believe it would be much more interesting if we got a few comics to explain what is going on and maybe even make us feel sorry for the lost universesTreasured Quotes
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2010-06-10, 05:54 PM (ISO 8601)
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Yeah, I would recommend going with a far more simpler idea and only expand when you've established those facts in a way everybody can understand.
Though since you're also the creator of ?, I guess we'll have to expect it to be confusing, don't we?AVATAR BATTLE ROYALE!
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2010-06-10, 08:18 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
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2010-06-11, 04:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-06-23, 10:25 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
sorry for not updating ment to before I went on vacation but forgot to.
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2010-06-30, 12:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
Alright here is the first of 15 backstory comics.
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2010-07-22, 05:34 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
-14 is up, I'll have to redo this one some time.
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2010-07-22, 05:51 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
for #0 simple caption boxes might have helped explaining.
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2010-07-22, 05:59 PM (ISO 8601)
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Nick, you do know that the reason your images aren't showing up is because you are linking to them in your gallery and not straight to the images, right?
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2010-07-23, 12:48 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
Last edited by Nageto004; 2010-07-23 at 12:59 AM.
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2010-08-19, 01:05 AM (ISO 8601)
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Kay' new one, I forgot how hard it is to get that hose in place for running.
Also what do you think of the new skin tone?Last edited by Nageto004; 2010-08-19 at 01:06 AM.
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2010-09-03, 04:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Re-Animation
new comic.
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2010-10-05, 07:24 AM (ISO 8601)
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NEW one is up.
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2010-10-05, 11:49 AM (ISO 8601)
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Ooh, omnious.
Me likeTreasured Quotes
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2010-11-10, 05:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-11-10, 05:53 PM (ISO 8601)
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Übungsflugzeug Comedy gold. I wonder if spanish speakers will also get such a good chuckle out of these names.
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2010-11-15, 04:13 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-11-15, 04:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-11-15, 07:10 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-11-16, 03:17 AM (ISO 8601)
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Halb Land Zwei Fluss and Übungsflugzeug. Funny names for countries I think.
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2010-11-16, 07:09 AM (ISO 8601)
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2010-11-16, 01:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-11-16, 01:54 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-11-16, 02:58 PM (ISO 8601)
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Last edited by Nageto004; 2010-11-16 at 02:59 PM.
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2010-11-16, 03:08 PM (ISO 8601)
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The Old Ones are drunk (on goosewater, normal booze don't work on them), why do you think they haven't invaded yet? Thus why it sounds like someone talking Burger-talk, they likely were
@^: Desert Camp? Odd name for a country, I'd say.
Then again, I'm living in Dan's field of grass...
I'm suspecting the namers were drunker than the Old Ones that day.Last edited by Mina Kobold; 2010-11-16 at 03:10 PM.
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