Avatar Battle Royale Discussion Thread XXXIV - "Go Go Power Lanterns!"

[CrimsonAngel]

I actually like the expression.

-amd now i'm thinking about someone else naked with a rose. Damn him.

[HalfTangible]

I actually like the expression.

-amd now i'm thinking about someone else naked with a rose. Damn him.

I said 'eyes' not 'expression'

[Goblin Scribe]

Is it politically incorrect to say I am extremely disturbed by this conversation?

[HalfTangible]

Is it politically incorrect to say I am extremely disturbed by this conversation?

Politics are banned on this forum. By extension, political correctness means squat.

Joking!
....sorta

[Green-Shirt Q]

I'm still kinda lacking on enough time to make comics purely for ABR, but I figured I'd drop by and offer a list of some of the interesting things Lying has accomplished in his near-seven centuries of living.

ooooooo! My turn =D

I'd put up a list of all the things the Qs have done in their eternity lifespan, living since before the beginning of time, but that would take far too long.

[Goblin Scribe]

Is anybody interested in joining this plot? I get that creating a new plot probably annoys some people, and they don't want to commit to a webcomic which'll just die after a week. I'll keep making comics until the story's done, whether or not a single additional comic appears, but it will probably lack much shininess.

Also, the plot starts exactly one week after the New Moon Elf Empire's surrender. I think I made it fairly clear that it closely followed the end of FFF, but I just felt I should make sure.
If nobody minds, I'll call this plot FFF 1.5: The Underdark Conflict.
If the first part is assuming too much, I'll just delete it, of course.

[HalfTangible]

I'd put up a list of all the things the Qs have done in their eternity lifespan, living since before the beginning of time, but that would take far too long.

I could make up Q's top ten list of ways for Lying to make himself less repulsive

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Is anybody interested in joining this plot? I get that creating a new plot probably annoys some people, and they don't want to commit to a webcomic which'll just die after a week. I'll keep making comics until the story's done, whether or not a single additional comic appears, but it will probably lack much shininess.

Also, the plot starts exactly one week after the New Moon Elf Empire's surrender. I think I made it fairly clear that it closely followed the end of FFF, but I just felt I should make sure.
If nobody minds, I'll call this plot FFF 1.5: The Underdark Conflict.
If the first part is assuming too much, I'll just delete it, of course.

I'm merely not interested to read about some plot that didn't even start yet, so I'm not gonna say anything until you actually post first comics

EDIT: *checks art thread*
Wow, you're a ninja!

[Goblin Scribe]

I'm merely not interested to read about some plot that didn't even start yet, so I'm not gonna say anything until you actually post first comics

*Twitch*
*Points to five new comics*


Edit: Hey, I was just re-reading the comics on We All Live in a Yellow Citadel. The kobold city should totally be rivals with a nearby beholder city with very advanced technology.

^ Hi-ya! *Trips on arm*
So, any critique?

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So, any critique?

Treeshades is not dead, just blind and tainted but not dead....she is/was actually intended to be a vital character during FI....

[Skeppio]

Is it wrong that I think Fay's avatar is sexy?

Eh, you wouldn't be the only one.

[GrlumpTheElder]

A naked man wearing nothing but a rose with the second creepiest pair of eyes on the entire page is NOT sexy.

I'd have to agree with this.

Just out of interest, who, in your opinion, has the creepiest paiir of eyes on that entire page?

[HalfTangible]

I'd have to agree with this.

Just out of interest, who, in your opinion, has the creepiest paiir of eyes on that entire page?

IMO they ARE the creepiest on the page. But i've been told that the way i do eyes now is very creepy =P

[Mina Kobold]

I like both Fay and and Half's eyes. :3

I'd make a list for Keveak as well but it would mostly consist of accidentally setting stuff on fire, running and poking the evil thing of evil.

And Crow'd decapitate me if I made one for him.

[HalfTangible]

I like both Fay and and Half's eyes. :3

I'd make a list for Keveak as well but it would mostly consist of accidentally setting stuff on fire, running and poking the evil thing of evil.

And Crow'd decapitate me if I made one for him.

What about for Crow's black raven thing?

[Mina Kobold]

What about for Crow's black raven thing?

I've learned not to spread rumours about anything with glowing red eyes.

I can reveal that it is actually not a raven!

Dun Dun DUNNN

[Goblin Scribe]

Treeshades is not dead, just blind and tainted but not dead....she is/was actually intended to be a vital character during FI....

Oh, oops. But is that common knowledge? If it is, it will need to change, but if Threeshades is thought to be deceased by most, it can still work.

[HalfTangible]

I've learned not to spread rumours about anything with glowing red eyes.

I can reveal that it is actually not a raven!

Dun Dun DUNNN

i thought it was a crow but saying 'crow's crow' just seems redundant.

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Oh, oops. But is that common knowledge? If it is, it will need to change, but if Threeshades is thought to be deceased by most, it can still work.

It can work that way, it just seemed odd to me that the narrator said it....

[Goblin Scribe]

So, how do plots usually start, activity-wise? I mostly started this plot because it seemed like there was some chance of others joining. I know it sounds whiny, but I'm a bit worried I've created the biggest flop plot since...well, a really floppy plot.

[-skimmer-]

So, how do plots usually start, activity-wise? I mostly started this plot because it seemed like there was some chance of others joining. I know it sounds whiny, but I'm a bit worried I've created the biggest flop plot since...well, a really floppy plot.

You did not, this actually isn't that bad....I remember atleast two plots that had only 1 comic posted in it by their own author and then died....

Just one tip: You want to start with EVERY character in one place so they can interact with each other from the start....right now you have two possible places far from each other (UNA HQ, Kobold cave) with nothing much interesting to do there....so one more comic with perhaps peacekeepers going through caves is in order to make joining this easier....but then again, anyone who wants to join can do that right now *hint* hint*

Also, I would think you already know we're not exactly the fastest artists around....you'll have to wait a while before someone makes comic for it (Not me though, I already owe some comics for 2 other plots, so that's what I'm working on right now....)

[Fay Graydon]

Why are Fayte's eye's creepy ? He's blind hence why there white,
and this new style alows for eyes to be a lot more expressive i feel

also I havn't finished Dawn of Yesterday... but Ican tell ya time travel will be involved

[Goblin Scribe]

You did not, this actually isn't that bad....I remember atleast two plots that had only 1 comic posted in it by their own author and then died....

Just one tip: You want to start with EVERY character in one place so they can interact with each other from the start....right now you have two possible places far from each other (UNA HQ, Kobold cave) with nothing much interesting to do there....so one more comic with perhaps peacekeepers going through caves is in order to make joining this easier....but then again, anyone who wants to join can do that right now *hint* hint*

You're prob'by right.
Currently, what I believe is implied, but not properly established, is that the UNA is unable to fully assist in the invasion effort. Thus, while there might be a few Peacekeepers here and there, most of the attackers are dwarves.

Oh, by the way, Keveak. What can you tell me about your kobold tribe? Where is it, what's it called, and what's it like?

[HalfTangible]

Why are Fayte's eye's creepy ? He's blind hence why there white,
and this new style alows for eyes to be a lot more expressive i feel

also I havn't finished Dawn of Yesterday... but Ican tell ya time travel will be involved

You're talking about the eyes as a style. I'm talking about his eyes. A very specific pair of eyes. Why do i need to explain this?

[Fay Graydon]

You're talking about the eyes as a style. I'm talking about his eyes. A very specific pair of eyes. Why do i need to explain this?

so what do you find creepy about them?

[Goblin Scribe]

so what do you find creepy about them?

It's probably because they just look creepy. All square and blank. Like some sort of zombie.

[CrimsonAngel]

You're talking about the eyes as a style. I'm talking about his eyes. A very specific pair of eyes. Why do i need to explain this?

Because you're the only one who understand what you are saying.

[HalfTangible]

Because you're the only one who understand what you are saying.

True is That not! I am not very ununderstandable! My sentences make the inverse of horrible sense!

[Rae Artemi]

True is That not! I am not very ununderstandable! My sentences make the inverse of horrible sense!

That confused me much less than my own thought process, so I think you're still not maybe so awesome not good.

[CrimsonAngel]

*explosions* (By Michael Bay)