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  1. 2011-01-27, 02:43 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #1
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    The Relics of Raz'ni

    Ok, so this my Fan-Comic inspired by the Order of The Stick created by Rich Burlew. It is essentially a cheesy quests for the maguffin(s) story with (hopefully) a few original elements tossed in there as well.

    Updates will have to be limited to one a week minimum. There is the potential for more than one a week, I just can't promise that.

    So without further delay here is the prologue:
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    Also any and all feedback is appreciated, I am still learning this after all.
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  2. 2011-01-27, 10:50 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #2
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    This looks intense. I'll have to wait and see how the story starts off...

    Your art style is pretty amazing as well.
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  3. 2011-01-28, 01:18 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #3
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    Yeah, that strip had to be fast paced in order to fit everything in. I know it is a long strip but I thought it would inappropriate for a "Prologue" to be more than one strip in length.

    Anyway, the first proper strip plus a cast page should hopefully be up this weekend
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  4. 2011-01-28, 03:48 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #4
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    thats nice magic clouds you did there for Urzil, think you can upgrade my Avvie?
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  5. 2011-01-28, 06:23 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by super dark33 View Post
    thats nice magic clouds you did there for Urzil, think you can upgrade my Avvie?
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    it's that avatar you didn't thank August for.

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    IC: Damn good start. I really want to see the next one.

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  6. 2011-01-28, 06:37 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #6
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    nope i dont remeber this, when did it happen? is it me?
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  7. 2011-01-28, 07:10 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #7
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    Wow! Really nice beginning, good script and awesome artwork.

    Just two things though:

    "It's over Urzil" is missing an "!". What? I found things like that annoying when I read

    Your running characters in robes look a little weird, kinde like they're floating. Rich does is like this (first panel). He shows the feet of the runner, which makes it look better.
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  8. 2011-02-06, 11:11 AM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #8
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    wouldn´t this go into the fancomic section?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ninjaman View Post
    wouldn´t this go into the fancomic section?
    Um... that's where it is
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