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Thread: The Hubworld:
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2011-04-02, 10:59 PM (ISO 8601)
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The Hubworld:
Index
Issue One: Es-tu, Pun-Puns?
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This is a webcomic set in The Hub setting (See my homebrew threads) and uses The Hub 0.5 (Basic) Rules.
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2011-04-03, 01:12 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
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- Germany (North)
Re: The Hubworld:
I feel like im repeating myself here, but the text needs to be bigger. >_>
(Characters look good though, if a bit stiff.)
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2011-04-03, 03:08 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Hubworld:
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2011-04-03, 05:40 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-03, 07:56 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
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- Germany (North)
Re: The Hubworld:
The text in the last panel is well sized here.
(That being said... could use a tad more internal coherence and less aggressive text backgrounds. Maybe desaturate them a bit.)
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2011-04-03, 08:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-04, 02:38 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jun 2010
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- Not in a secret base, no!
Re: The Hubworld:
Looks good, but are you still use Paint? wouldn't Inkskape be better it's free, too.
Grammer is my declared deadly enemy!
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Let's PLay's in German Take a Look at Bravely Default.
Nexus Characters: LINK
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2011-04-04, 12:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-04, 06:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-05, 01:38 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jun 2010
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- Not in a secret base, no!
Re: The Hubworld:
A hint make the background in a lower Level, because then you won't have problems like in the first two pictures of the Secound page. (The white lines around the chars.)
Grammer is my declared deadly enemy!
Avatar by Ceika
Let's PLay's in German Take a Look at Bravely Default.
Nexus Characters: LINK
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2011-04-05, 12:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-05, 05:30 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-06, 06:04 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
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- Germany (North)
Re: The Hubworld:
Why is there a random boot in the last panel?
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2011-04-06, 12:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-06, 06:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-07, 05:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Sep 2008
Re: The Hubworld:
I like. Alot. I'm going to be checking out these rules, the setting is insanely cool. Also, one slight thing bugging me: For the title of the first issue, it's "Es-tu". Et means "and" and Es/Est means "are", depending on the gramatical person (Tu es, Il/Elle est = You are, He/She is). I'm francophone, we make a big deal out of this .
Last edited by Lord Loss; 2011-04-07 at 05:22 PM.
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2011-04-07, 05:37 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-07, 06:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-08, 08:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-09, 02:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Denmark
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2011-04-09, 04:09 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2007
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2011-04-10, 12:06 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-11, 03:17 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-12, 10:55 AM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2010
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- Israel
Re: The Hubworld:
'We are doing a little work right now. your image will be back soon'?
Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-04-12, 11:30 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jul 2010
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- Workshop, Necropolis
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Re: The Hubworld:
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2011-04-12, 01:41 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2007
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2011-04-12, 03:28 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-13, 04:56 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-13, 06:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2010
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- Israel
Re: The Hubworld:
its fixed. and doesnt a greataxe do 1d12 damage, x3 crit?
Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-04-14, 03:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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