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Thread: How does this look so far?
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2011-04-25, 05:09 AM (ISO 8601)
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How does this look so far?
Working on something and want some feedback on it so far. I just have it in black and white so I can figure out tones and shadows. It's supposed to be a humanoid made out of mud. He's holding a staff which I need to edit.
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2011-04-25, 10:31 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
the hand looks likes its 6 fingers, every one of them a dual self opposing thumb set, yes?
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2011-04-25, 10:34 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
quite cool.
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2011-04-25, 12:59 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-25, 03:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
I personally think it rather good maybe showing off that he is made of mud. He looks quite a bit more like stone up on the torso but the feet look very much like a mud man's would
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2011-04-25, 05:28 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-27, 02:05 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
Worked on it more:
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2011-04-27, 10:59 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
Dr. epic that is epic, no i canīt wait for you to colour it.
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2011-04-27, 11:07 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
actually, i preffered the other fingers, it was very cool, and if you could make your hand the way you want it, a very efficient hand for grasping and power.
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2011-04-27, 11:26 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-04-27, 12:17 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
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2011-04-27, 11:34 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
Remember that color is more than just a flat hue over your grisaille.
He does look quite muddy though, which is good.
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2011-05-01, 01:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
Got another image, this a street soldier anti-hero.
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I still have more work to do on it.
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2011-05-01, 02:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
He holds his machinegun wierd.
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2011-05-01, 03:07 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-05-02, 12:10 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-05-02, 10:40 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
his hand is flat to the perspective of the viewer, so the gun is being held in such a way as for us to see the side. but the stock then bends back and nestles in the crook of his arm. Its a very mc escheresque gun.
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2011-05-07, 06:30 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
What you'd usually see with a gun stock is that it would be in front of the forearm as viewed from that angle and holding it like that.
I like the mudman, but I think that the orb of the staff being a different color would really make it pop.
In any case, both good pieces.I used to live in a world of terrible beauty, and then the beauty left.
Dioxazine purple.
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2011-05-10, 10:10 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
Color and texture definitely helped the mud man. I think the drippy mud looks too much like vegetation hanging off him- like vines or something. Or it makes him look too wet- too drippy. Just my opinion. He looks pretty darn good though.
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2011-05-10, 11:28 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: How does this look so far?
Does the street soldier guy live in upper Siberia? He seems to have enough clothes to make an polar explorer feel uncomfortably warm.
His head seems a bit too small even for bulky clothes, but otherwise he's quite good, I must say.Clouddreamer Teddy by me, high above the world, far beyond its matters...
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