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Thread: HA: Hell's Gate
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2011-05-18, 06:51 PM (ISO 8601)Pixie in the Playground
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HA: Hell's Gate
This is my oots' style comic's first 10 pages, in archive.
Haphazard Alignment: Hell's Gate
I'm still improving, but I'd like some feedback.
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2011-05-21, 09:12 PM (ISO 8601)Troll in the Playground
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Re: HA: Hell's Gate
The speech bubbles are a little messed up.
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2011-05-22, 12:34 AM (ISO 8601)Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: HA: Hell's Gate
Some of the positioning of the speech bubbles are awkward because I can't tell who is saying what first.
Also your circles are not complete circles. If you look closely, you can see that there is a small gap or a wedge missing from the circle. If you are using Inkscape, to fix this just press the button furthest to the right when you are using the circle tool or are selecting an existing circle with the circle tool.
Currently playing a "blind" (Miraluka) sniper in a Star Wars SAGA Edition RP
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2011-05-25, 05:23 AM (ISO 8601)Pixie in the Playground
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Re: HA: Hell's Gate
Ok. I'm in the process of fixing the speech bubbles. They should be labeled soon, depending on how quickly I work/send back to the server.
I kinda like the circles not being closed. After 10 pages, I've warmed to it as kind of a signature. Anyone who tries to take my work will have difficulty trying to edit out all of the gaps! But I'll remember your advice in case I start working on another inkscape project. :)
Pages 11 and 12 should be up soon.
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