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    you should put all the strips in the first post, so we wont need to search the thread.
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    Issue 10: Apparently, !POP! isn't just for when characters appear anymore...
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    Great. Now that you've hit 10, you can defend yourself in ABR. Or I could just kill you if you want to quit. I'm tired of waiting.
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    ...Wow. He's a fast dragger. Especially since Blue and Grlump seem to have disappeared. I think if you stopped using the 4-panels-per-comic format for now you could fit a lot more story in each one without sacrificing anything. Most of the space in these giant panels is going unused. And I still think the nonspeaking characters look vacant.

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    The only reason I was using four panels was so I could show everyone and everything. Now that I don't need to, it will go back to it's regular 12 Panel format.
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    Something that was bothering me was the spelling of disintegrate in the first few comics.

    Otherwise keep up the work, just try to polish it up a bit instead of putting out so many frequently. Since there are a few mistakes here or there =)

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    Issue 11: Low Quality
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    I'll admit, there are a lot of errors in this strip both panel-wise and in the background. I tried to fix most of the errors, but some still remain. Thankfully, the next strip will be in a different area so these errors will not appear again.
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    Change the white lines to black and the text in the bubbles to comic sans an- -- I feel like an editor now. The previous is just advice, not orders. And by that I mean the changes to format. Anyhoo, keep up the good work
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    Alright. On the Comic Sans subject, that on my part was a mistake for the selecting the font.
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    You should draw the scenery underneath the panels.
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    Quality, not quantity.[/cliché]
    If you know there are errors, shouldn't you fix them before posting the issue?

    Also, why is it called Low Quality?

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    I tried fixing them, but there were too many.
    Because, the background of the strip is of lower quality then the others.

    Also: No update tonight. I have to make some new templates:
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    Issue 12: A town made at Spawn. Hence, Spawntown.
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    Heh, preempting the F word on the Generic Market sign.
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    Issue 13: The Explanation, Part One
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    The flashback panels were supposed to be in Sepia, but for some reason it didn't appear after I uploaded it to Inkscape
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    I like the top hat, in spite of it looking a bit odd.
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    You still need indicators for who's talking.
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    yay, I appear.

    seems to be doing good so far.
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    Issue 14: Bees. My god.
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    An Amazon attack,

    Good panel!

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    Have you been watching the facebook group chat? Because I must have said "Bees. My god." a million times.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    Have you been watching the facebook group chat? Because I must have said "Bees. My god." a million times.
    Nope. I saw there was a thread for it a few days ago, but I never really looked into it. I only use Facebook for one reason: so I can talk to my brother.
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    its obvios hes lying
    you made me nicely.
    Im having a watch-log-thing.
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    Thanks, Superdark
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    though robe is a bit too grey... darken it up a little.
    and my avatar doesnt have an eyed amulet for nothing you know! its 33! an intillegent amulet who enchances my casting powers.
    Im having a watch-log-thing.
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    I have a reason for the color of the robe being as it is currently
    Also, you will find an amulet...eventually
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    it will take an arc, wont it?
    Im having a watch-log-thing.
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    it will take an arc, wont it?
    I am not going to reveal any more, because I don't want to spoil anything.
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    you should put all the strips in the first post, so we wont need to search the thread.
    I find myself having to agree with this sentiment.
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    I apologize for the lack of updates, but tomorrow, I will create a new strip
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