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Thread: Omnitopia: The Playground
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2011-07-01, 04:54 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
you should put all the strips in the first post, so we wont need to search the thread.
Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-07-01, 05:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-01, 06:53 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Nov 2008
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
Great. Now that you've hit 10, you can defend yourself in ABR. Or I could just kill you if you want to quit. I'm tired of waiting.
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2011-07-01, 10:11 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
...Wow. He's a fast dragger. Especially since Blue and Grlump seem to have disappeared. I think if you stopped using the 4-panels-per-comic format for now you could fit a lot more story in each one without sacrificing anything. Most of the space in these giant panels is going unused. And I still think the nonspeaking characters look vacant.
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2011-07-01, 10:32 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
The only reason I was using four panels was so I could show everyone and everything. Now that I don't need to, it will go back to it's regular 12 Panel format.
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2011-07-03, 11:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2006
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- Canada
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
Something that was bothering me was the spelling of disintegrate in the first few comics.
Otherwise keep up the work, just try to polish it up a bit instead of putting out so many frequently. Since there are a few mistakes here or there =)
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2011-07-06, 04:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
Issue 11: Low Quality
SpoilerI'll admit, there are a lot of errors in this strip both panel-wise and in the background. I tried to fix most of the errors, but some still remain. Thankfully, the next strip will be in a different area so these errors will not appear again.
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2011-07-06, 04:05 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
Change the white lines to black and the text in the bubbles to comic sans an- -- I feel like an editor now. The previous is just advice, not orders. And by that I mean the changes to format. Anyhoo, keep up the good work
~ Thanks to Crimmy for Richardtar ~
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2011-07-06, 05:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-06, 09:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
You should draw the scenery underneath the panels.
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2011-07-06, 10:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
Quality, not quantity.[/cliché]
If you know there are errors, shouldn't you fix them before posting the issue?
Also, why is it called Low Quality?
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2011-07-07, 09:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
I tried fixing them, but there were too many.
Because, the background of the strip is of lower quality then the others.
Also: No update tonight. I have to make some new templates:
Goblin
Hobgoblin
One-Eyed Hobgoblin
"Invisible" Goblin
Wizard Goblin
Hobgoblin Chief
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2011-07-13, 03:12 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-14, 02:12 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jul 2010
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
Heh, preempting the F word on the Generic Market sign.
“I’m a Terrorist not an idiot.” - Me
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2011-07-14, 01:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-14, 06:32 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
I like the top hat, in spite of it looking a bit odd.
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2011-07-14, 06:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
You still need indicators for who's talking.
~ Thanks to Crimmy for Richardtar ~
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2011-07-14, 06:45 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
yay, I appear.
seems to be doing good so far.
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2011-07-15, 02:58 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-15, 06:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
An Amazon attack,
Good panel!
~ ♅
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2011-07-15, 11:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
Have you been watching the facebook group chat? Because I must have said "Bees. My god." a million times.
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2011-07-16, 04:18 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
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2011-07-16, 04:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
its obvios hes lying
you made me nicely.Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-07-16, 05:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-16, 06:05 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
though robe is a bit too grey... darken it up a little.
and my avatar doesnt have an eyed amulet for nothing you know! its 33! an intillegent amulet who enchances my casting powers.Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-07-16, 06:08 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-16, 06:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
it will take an arc, wont it?
Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-07-16, 07:44 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-07-22, 03:08 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Omnitopia: The Playground
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2011-07-22, 10:07 PM (ISO 8601)
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