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Thread: Broken Circle
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2011-09-08, 06:26 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jul 2005
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Broken Circle
http://brokencircle.thecomicseries.com/
Mine and my wife's. New and updating Saturdays. Exalted with a fairly serious story.GNU Terry Pratchett
My DMing advice.
Hong Kong
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2011-09-16, 12:02 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Jul 2005
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- Over there!
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Re: Broken Circle
Anyone?
GNU Terry Pratchett
My DMing advice.
Hong Kong
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2011-09-16, 05:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
- Location
- Germany (North)
Re: Broken Circle
You need a better pitch than that.
And make the site more navigatable. (That is, have the latest comic on the frontpage.)
And work more on the art. (It's expressive in a way, but lacks refinement)
And have text in an actual font, not handwriting (for readability purposes).
And not have speech bubbles lead directly into the mouth of a character. (Distance is important.)
>_>
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Yah. Can't bring myself to actually read any of it. Handwritten text is terrible.