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    My golem is helping! what will it do now? spit salt out of its eyes towards Penny?

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    Its Alive!!!!!!!! MWA-HA-HA-HA-HA!
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    Quote Originally Posted by super dark33 View Post
    My golem is helping! what will it do now? spit salt out of its eyes towards Penny?
    Eyeballs shooting out salt? If that were a human instead of a golem it would be the most painful thing ever.
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    Why salt?

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    Cause salt stings the eyes. and with enough velocity, tear throught you skin, and SALT YOUR WOUNDS!
    its innovative!
    you will become like Lott's wife from the bible!

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    Whoo! I only just realised this was updating again. Well, it's a good present to get for Christmas, at least. Finding this going again, that is.
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    Can I be in this story?
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    Hey, It's alive! Awesome!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dark Elf Bard View Post
    Can I be in this story?
    Well as the front post says, just say you want in and you'll be in. Provided you can think of a crystal power and a few powers but that's beside the point.
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    I'm actually starting to reconsider that. I seem to have reach near max capacity of characters it seems. I am now finding myself creating extra filler roles to now accomodate new people. I'm afraid that if I accept any more people, I may be stuck with writers block on how to get everyone in.

    Anyways, I'll try and have the next part up tomorrow. If anyone has me on their steam or anything that they can do a friendly "reminder" that would be helpful. League of Legends, Starcraft 2, and Modern Warfare 3 have sucked out soooo much of my life.

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    Paladin Academy: Chapter 2: Part 18
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    Nil jumps the last couple steps of the staircase. He looks around in horror as the once almost repaired academy was now torn apart. He heard a moan of agony and quickly rushed towards it. As he reached the wounded paladin, he slid down to kneel over them. It was hard to find a calm sensation in the chaos around him, but the sense of pain from the paladin focused his mind. He laid his hand over the wound and felt the skin fix itself over.

    When the worst was healed, he began to scan the training grounds for other paladins. It was hard to think of anything but fear and regret at the sight. He glanced up at the rock golem before hurrying on.
    "Dammit Blue! Do something already!"

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    Sarudark was having the time of his life. He was thrashing anything that moved down below him. He giggled with glee every time he knocked a paladin aside.
    "Yes! Feel the pain! I won't kill any of you. I'll let my friend pain do that for me. You'll all die slowly, to your own pain!"
    He slammed the golem's fist next to another paladin, causing her to fly 15 feet on to the ground motionless.
    "Now you're not suppose to be knocked out. How can you bleed to death properly when you can't feel pain?"
    The golem pointed its index finger right over the paladin. He then drew several symbols over the orb and a thread of red light emerged from the finger into the paladin. At once the paladin awoke and screamed, clutching the side of her waist where blood was coming out from the wound.
    "That's better."

    He then looked up, disappointed. Causing pain and destruction to paladins was fun, but there was no pointless resistance to it. He turned the golem around to look at Blue through its eyes. The wizard still hadn't moved and was just letting him do this. His mouth flicked with annoyance before he spoke.
    "Fine. You don't want to do anything, then I'll crush you right now."
    The golem raised it's hand and then swung it down, breaking off a large part of the balcony as it crushed down on top of Blue.
    "Ha! This is the best day ev-!"
    The piece of balcony that was falling suddenly sprung up to crash with incredible force into the Golem's head. Sarudark was flung across the room as a flash of blue light erupted from the orb. He looked back to it and gasped in horror. A deep crack had appeared across the glassy surface. Through the golem's eyes, a floating blue wizard remained in the exact spot that the golem had attacked. And while Blue was in the exact same pose, the eye's were now glowing a menacing yellow.

    Sarudark then understood that the wizard wasn't just frozen to the spot. Blue was actually unraveling his spell, undoing the vital support beams. And by the size of the crack on his crystal ball, he was very close to succeeding.
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    Sorry for the delay. Hit massive writters block on how to start this part. Anyways, wrote this quickly before going to class, so their might be some errors. I had actually caught myself almost spelling calm as clam.

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    I'm ashamed to say I missed the previous update. This is what I get for not posting so it won't have a checkmark.

    But anyway, Blue, like all wizards, doesn't need to use offensive spells to attack. All it takes is telekinesis.

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    Interesting, short but makes a great deal of sense.

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    Interesting, short but makes a great deal of sense.
    In what way?

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    In what way?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lil Shiro View Post
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    Well, you're one of the main characters, are you not?

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    Hello everyone, Let me first tell you that Iīve been reading this story for the past 2 days, It completly captureed me, I could only wait to catch up to see if I could get a spot as a character, but as I read I realized for the dates of the posts that this threat has been "dead" for sometime.

    What happended, plz answer Im really looking forward to continue to read this amazing story

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nergalus View Post
    Hello everyone, Let me first tell you that Iīve been reading this story for the past 2 days, It completly captureed me, I could only wait to catch up to see if I could get a spot as a character, but as I read I realized for the dates of the posts that this threat has been "dead" for sometime.

    What happended, plz answer Im really looking forward to continue to read this amazing story

    thanks
    What happened, writers block. I had no idea how to write out the next part. Each attempt I hated the result and scrubbed it every time. After a while, I tried to take a break to see if that would help, but that only made it worst. I had everything after the next part all planned out, but this next part and the fact that I have no idea how to write it out has stalled this story.

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    Once again, thread necromancy on someone's first post...

    Well, at least it motivated me to read the rules.

    Also, my Grammar Nazi is telling you to get spellcheck.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
    What happened, writers block. I had no idea how to write out the next part. Each attempt I hated the result and scrubbed it every time. After a while, I tried to take a break to see if that would help, but that only made it worst. I had everything after the next part all planned out, but this next part and the fact that I have no idea how to write it out has stalled this story.
    Try to find a way not to write the next part? I remember I had huge trouble writing a scene of dialogue, and I managed to exposit that it had happened in the next one by just cutting.
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    Silver, I really hope you find a way, I created an account here just to ask what heppened, the story really is very good, I actully add you on League of legens so i could ask you, havent been able to catch you online though :P (I not a stalker, really, just wanted to know)

    Anyways, If you cant continue or wont, I just want to congratulate you for your work. I liked a lot n_n

    And of course if you do cantinue and if its not too much trouble I would like to have a character, you know... you seem to be a little short on the Fallen paladinīs department after grim gruesome passing :D

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nergalus View Post
    And of course if you do cantinue and if its not too much trouble I would like to have a character, you know... you seem to be a little short on the Fallen paladinīs department after grim gruesome passing :D
    A) The waiting list is really long. And you're somewhere near the end (it depends on how easily it can fit into the story, but Silver is placing higher priority on the people who have been waiting longer. And the story could very well end before half the waiting list even gets cameos).
    B) I see paladins in this series like Solar Exalted. Except they actually are shining paragons of good (well, more than the Solars anyway, which focus more on bravery and skill than any morals). Having too many guys that have proven themselves to actually have the conviction to stand up to powerful evils turn evil themselves just ruins it. We had Grim. Lix could go either way. Too many cheapens the effect and could create plot holes.

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    A) The waiting list is really long. And you're somewhere near the end (it depends on how easily it can fit into the story, but Silver is placing higher priority on the people who have been waiting longer. And the story could very well end before half the waiting list even gets cameos).
    B) I see paladins in this series like Solar Exalted. Except they actually are shining paragons of good (well, more than the Solars anyway, which focus more on bravery and skill than any morals). Having too many guys that have proven themselves to actually have the conviction to stand up to powerful evils turn evil themselves just ruins it. We had Grim. Lix could go either way. Too many cheapens the effect and could create plot holes.
    Yes, I am aware of the really long wating list, worth taking the shot anyways. And well any part is good for me if I even get to oportunity to cameo in

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    Well, I decided a while back to have some of my friends read through to help me with this next part. The prolem is I need the next part to transition to the part after. I can't just skip it because it would skip straight to ater the fight.

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    Yay Nergalus! cheering Sliverraptor!

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    Yay Nergalus! cheering Sliverraptor!
    Yes, thanks, we cant let this die, specially if silver wants to continue

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    The star character is here! I know I'm your favorite. No need to tell me.

    Anyways, I really liked when you were doing this Silver, and it was always really good. Plus, I'm just sad that I never talk to you anymore.
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    The star character is here! I know I'm your favorite. No need to tell me.
    Yes you are, Kurama+Viola FTW!!!

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    I will try to continue this. I keep thinking of scenes and parts to add later on from time to time. Its just this damn part thats preventing me. However, I may have to reread over everything to get back into the swing of things.

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