PEACH Exchange

[Network]

I'd like to receive reviews of my homebrew feats. I did get some, just not recent ones.

Hi,

I'm not sure where the best place to post this is but I'm looking for gamers to try out a beta version of a free online SRD 3.5 character builder I have programmed, staged at www.herogoblin.com.

I tested it, but I find it very limited in content. I noticed some bugs : it allows you to take Leadership at first level, and you cannot take Alertness if you have a familiar (technically, you have it as a bonus feat, but only if your familiar is next to you). I made only one character, so my review is in no way complete.

[Overneath]

I hit up Network's feats list. I'm not sure how well I can do most PEACHing, but I'll try my best on some more on request. In return, Planar Conduit and Favored Communionist (posted by Everynone, created by both of us) could use some feedback.

[DracoDei]

I hit up Network's feats list. I'm not sure how well I can do most PEACHing, but I'll try my best on some more on request. In return, Planar Conduit and Favored Communionist (posted by Everynone, created by both of us) could use some feedback.

Including a link to that class, rather than making them look for it here or elsewhere might streamline the process.

[Network]

I posted my review on the Planar Conduit. The Favored Communionist is here, but even after reading it, I don't find much to say about it.

[Wyrmhero]

I would be very grateful if someone could have a look at my Bloodsword class: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=303610.

I'm not sure how well I could PEACH for other people, but I'm certainly willing to give it a go, though I have little experience with higher-level campaigns.

EDIT: Sorry, misread the last post date in the thread - Hopefully this doesn't count as thread necromancy

[Jormengand]

I would be very grateful if someone could have a look at my Bloodsword class: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=303610.

I'm not sure how well I could PEACH for other people, but I'm certainly willing to give it a go, though I have little experience with higher-level campaigns.

EDIT: Sorry, misread the last post date in the thread - Hopefully this doesn't count as thread necromancy

The topic is still relevant, so it should be fine.

I'll give it a look. If I make something new, you owe me. :p

[Belial_the_Leveler]

I'd be grateful if you guys took a look at my feat-based Warrior here;
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304478

[Perseus]

What does PEACH stand for?

Seriously, is there a terminology thread somewhere?

[Belial_the_Leveler]

Please Examine And Critique Honestly.

Physiologic Evaluation After Coronary Hyperemia.

Promotions Entertainment and Corporate Hospitality.



There are others but those are the most widely used IMHO.

[Philemonite]

Please Evaluate and Critique Honestly.

[Wyrmhero]

The topic is still relevant, so it should be fine.

I'll give it a look. If I make something new, you owe me. :p

Thank you very much. If you make something, let me know, I'd be happy to return the favour.

I'd be grateful if you guys took a look at my feat-based Warrior here;
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304478

I would have a look, but I'm afraid I have almost no idea about Epic Feats, so I'm afraid I can't judge your character. Sorry.

[ngilop]

Take a look at my Grappler and let me know whats up.


I'll be taking a look at your fighter now bvelial.

[Perseus]

Please Examine And Critique Honestly.

Physiologic Evaluation After Coronary Hyperemia.

Promotions Entertainment and Corporate Hospitality.



There are others but those are the most widely used IMHO.

Please Evaluate and Critique Honestly.

Ooh... Well then... I'll need to remember that. I'm almost ready for my Juggernaut to be PEACH'ed

[Belial_the_Leveler]

Grappler PEACHed.


Anyone want to take a look at my three fairy-tale themed classes?
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=303561
I had plans for a fourth (a dragon) but it didn't work out.

[Maginomicon]

I've created a number of things that I'd like PEACHed.

Real Alignments

This kind-of got PEACHed, but not really (at least not in my book). It's so far been "oh hey that's neat" and not enough "here's some problems you might run into in practice narratively or in character creation". Even those to this point that seemed to put thought into their responses didn't seem to actually read the full text. It's infuriating. The clarification post I added later on that discussed the apparent sticking-points was left hanging.

Metamagic Access

Saying essentially "Scrap this idea entirely and go with this other thing" is not a PEACH, it's like spitting in your face.

Vitalizing Subvariant Fix

No replies period.

"Make Elan" Psionic Communal

Not PEACHed, just people whining about the premise. No replies to the actual draft.

------------ RECENTLY

Passive Ability Checks

*sigh* One small suggestion... one. Yeah that thread's well on the way to "buried" status.

Recruiting for Futuristic Campaign Setting

Not exactly a PEACH request so much as calling for regular PEACH for helping with building for a project that has already a massive amount of effort put in. So much source material is available (110+ pages) that I can't really say "here's this thing, PEACH". I need volunteers.

[ArcturusV]

Link that I'd like looked at is in my Signature there. "Vampire Monster Class". Want to have some eyes on it and hammer out any potential kinks before I test it live with a group.

Thank you for anyone who does.

I don't claim master kitbasher status, but if anyone does look, I'll take a look at their stuff and give my thoughts.

[ngilop]

My Soul Blade

and

My Hexblade

please :)

Still looking for pcritiques for these 2.

i'll be looking at your real alignments Maginomicon

[Wyrmhero]

ArcturusV, I have PEACHed your Vampire Monster Class, so if you could return the favour with my Bloodsword, if you would be so kind.

Maginomicon, I have posted a few ideas for Passive Ability Checks, though I couldn't think of that many unfortunately.

[Perseus]

So my Warrior isn't done yet but I just placed this up

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=305065

If anyone wants to take a stab at it. It is a FFT Knight Prestige Class.

Im working on a FF Tactics type of summoner PrC that whose summons just hit the entire battlefield instead of sticking around. I was thinking of waiting on that for after the Warrior (juggernaut/savage) is made but I got sucked into FF Tactics recently haha.

[ArcturusV]

Been PEACH'd to the best of my ability Wyrmhero. Hope it helped some. Sorry I couldn't do more.

[ddude987]

Hello all! I prefer to PEACH classes, though I find feats fun too. The thing I would really appreciate being PEACHed is my fighter rework (see signature). I know fighter is nothing new but I would like some fresh input on it as I have gotten all or most grammar and poorly written abilities fixed up and am looking forward to some nitty gritty constructive criticism. Will PEACH anybody else's classes who is willing to look at my fighter. Thanks.

edit: Perseus, I couldn't resist taking a look at your knight class and then once I looked I decided to go ahead and PEACH it for you to the best of my ability.
edit: edit: Also checked out your vampire homebrew arcturusV. Pretty awesome.

[Philemonite]

I made my (small) contribution to The Ivalice Knight, I hope you continue with FFT classes.

I could use some advice for a little something I'm trying to create.

[Jormengand]

All those with a Tome of Magic and a clue why truenamers are bad, could you look at the Worldspeaker please?

[Rephath]

I need some PEACH on this game, and will PEACH a game in return.

http://archons.wikia.com/wiki/Archons_Wiki

[TheFamilarRaven]

So, despite the number of views and a PEACH request, my homebrew base class for 3.5 has gone un-critiqued, which I think it needs. If you happen to critique it, please either PM me a link or leave a comment with something you'd like PEACH'd and I'll be happy to do so! Provided said request is 3.5 (i'm not too familiar with other systems).

The Havoc Knight

[Jormengand]

So, despite the number of views and a PEACH request, my homebrew base class for 3.5 has gone un-critiqued, which I think it needs. If you happen to critique it, please either PM me a link or leave a comment with something you'd like PEACH'd and I'll be happy to do so! Provided said request is 3.5 (i'm not too familiar with other systems).

The Havoc Knight

Hmmm... do you have access to the Tome of Magic?

[TheFamilarRaven]

Indeed i do, I shall PEACH your WorldSpeaker, in exchange for a PEACH of my Havoc Knight, and I'll pay you Tuesday for a hamburger today, as well, (and perhaps tell u why tuenamers are bad.) but i'll have to go over the turenamer

[Palanan]

Hey, folks. I wouldn't mind a PEACH of my Jade Empress Longwing, since it hasn't received any comments yet.

Yes, it's a butterfly, and not rawr-optimized. But sometimes...sometimes, you just want a butterfly. That helps with acid spells.

[Plato Play-Doh]

PEACHED the Havoc Knight and Asteron's Commander project. I'd like some PEACH for the defenses overhaul in my signature.

[Jormengand]

Hey, folks. I wouldn't mind a PEACH of my Jade Empress Longwing, since it hasn't received any comments yet.

Yes, it's a butterfly, and not rawr-optimized. But sometimes...sometimes, you just want a butterfly. That helps with acid spells.

Done. Not going to expect you to do an entire class in return, though.