PEACH Exchange

[Palanan]

Originally Posted by Jormengand
Done. Not going to expect you to do an entire class in return, though.

Thanks for your comments, it's great to get some feedback.

I'd be game for the Worldspeaker, except I don't know anything about Truenamers or subsystems in general. If you've got a mean critter or two, that I could do.

[Zaydos]

I'd be game for a few.

Right now the things I'd want most are:
Incarnation: Aimed to be about sorcerer power level, unfortunately I'm not sure I know how powerful domains or sorcerers are.

Courtier: A noble/aristocrat class worth using, hopefully even by PCs.

Morphic Claw A year old base class contest entry I was never happy with, has 2 martial disciplines to go with it.

The other one I'm interested in asking for PEACHes for is in the current Base Class Contest and I'd feel bad asking for it here until that is done.

Do you still need people for the Warrior/Fairy-Tale classes (Belial) and World Speaker (Jormengand)?

[Jormengand]

I'd be game for a few.

Right now the things I'd want most are:
Incarnation: Aimed to be about sorcerer power level, unfortunately I'm not sure I know how powerful domains or sorcerers are.

Courtier: A noble/aristocrat class worth using, hopefully even by PCs.

Morphic Claw A year old base class contest entry I was never happy with, has 2 martial disciplines to go with it.

The other one I'm interested in asking for PEACHes for is in the current Base Class Contest and I'd feel bad asking for it here until that is done.

Do you still need people for the Warrior/Fairy-Tale classes (Belial) and World Speaker (Jormengand)?

Yes. I'll catch up with your brew once I've taken my DM'ing hat off, so do the Speaker whenever you're ready.

[TheFamilarRaven]

So I created this Base Class, and thanks to all those who PEACHed my work, I managed to re-work the class using all their suggestions to what I think is a vast improvement.

The reason why i'm posting is, I haven't received any feedback on my re-work, (I don't know if i'm allowed to re-post for the same homebrew or not ) But i would really like some PEACHing done to my re-work of this class. It's a base class for 3.5

As always, I'd be willing to PEACH any and all homebrews in exchange for some feedback, provided the request is 3.5 (not too familiar with other systems). Thank you.

[Iamyourking]

I gave it a look, although there wasn't much wrong with it.

I have not gotten any commentary on Sons of the Fallen (See my signature) in months, so that's what I would like you to review. The same goes for anyone else willing to give it a look.

[Proud Tortoise]

I gave it a look, although there wasn't much wrong with it.

I have not gotten any commentary on Sons of the Fallen (See my signature) in months, so that's what I would like you to review. The same goes for anyone else willing to give it a look.

I will do so if you review http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307113

[Iamyourking]

Done. If you don't think you can properly assess the mechanical side, feel free to discuss the setting.

[CinuzIta]

hello! I'd like to have my Abjurer class peached! I'm gonna use it in a campaign soon, so I need your opinions pretty urgently:)

The class is complete, I just need to post the shield skills (thing that I'm going to do soon).

Here is the link to the class:

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307084

[Alabenson]

Would someone be able to take a look at the my Nightblade class? It's supposed to be a hybrid skillmonkey/initiator class, and is my first attempt at homebrewing a base class from scratch.

[Proud Tortoise]

Would someone be able to take a look at the my Nightblade class? It's supposed to be a hybrid skillmonkey/initiator class, and is my first attempt at homebrewing a base class from scratch.

I could handle that if you look at my skirmisher.

[Zakaroth]

I would like some feedback on my Energon Evoker (PrC), mostly balance wise, but any would be great.

[Proud Tortoise]

I would like some feedback on my Energon Evoker (PrC), mostly balance wise, but any would be great.

Done, if you would be so kind as to evaluate skirmisher: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307113

[Zakaroth]

Done, if you would be so kind as to evaluate skirmisher: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307113

I didn't see any feedback at my energon evoker, or did you mean you will do it if I reviewed yours? I was a bit confused there
Anyway, I did my best reviewing your skirmisher.

[Palanan]

So, I'd appreciate some feedback on my Madcaller PrC, which is a reworked alienist with 100% more madness and summoned aberrations. I've kind of painted myself into a corner with the tenth-level capstone, and I'm open to ideas on how to resolve it.

[Plato Play-Doh]

I've PEACHed the Mindcaller and the Courtier, and would love some more PEACH on my defenses overhaul.

[Palanan]

Okay, thanks--I appreciate the suggestions for the madcaller. Not sure if I can comment insightfully on your defense mods, but I'll take a look and see if mad inspiration strikes.

[Zakaroth]

So, I'd appreciate some feedback on my Madcaller PrC, which is a reworked alienist with 100% more madness and summoned aberrations. I've kind of painted myself into a corner with the tenth-level capstone, and I'm open to ideas on how to resolve it.

As I'm a fan of Far Realm related stuff, I was planning on commenting on this class anyway, but now we can do a nice peach exchange . So tonight, when I get back from work, I will give some feedback.

[Palanan]

Outstanding, I'll look forward to hearing your thoughts. And I'll try to take a look at your evoker in the meantime.



EDIT: Thanks for your comments on the Madcaller, I appreciate it. Just left you some commentary on the Energon Evoker.

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[DracoDei]

So I created this Base Class, and thanks to all those who PEACHed my work, I managed to re-work the class using all their suggestions to what I think is a vast improvement.

The reason why i'm posting is, I haven't received any feedback on my re-work, (I don't know if i'm allowed to re-post for the same homebrew or not ) But i would really like some PEACHing done to my re-work of this class. It's a base class for 3.5

As always, I'd be willing to PEACH any and all homebrews in exchange for some feedback, provided the request is 3.5 (not too familiar with other systems). Thank you.

In the homebrew section the original poster is always allowed to bump their thread. This should only be used (once) if nobody comments after a week or so, or if you do a major update/edit to the subject of the thread.

[TheFamilarRaven]

In the homebrew section the original poster is always allowed to bump their thread. This should only be used (once) if nobody comments after a week or so, or if you do a major update/edit to the subject of the thread.

Thanks . I got it sorted out eventually after I re-read posting rules, main reason I posted that is because I did update the post with a change log so the post was "up to date", but I got no responses. But that's fixed now as well.

[AttilaTheGeek]

Hello! I've recently finished the temporalist, a class that manipulates time without breaking the game, and so I'm looking for feedback. I'll PEACH Palanan's Madcaller and Zakaroth's Energy Evoker; hopefully I can get some feedback in return?

Edit: I've written a critique of the Madcaller. I love it! I think you did a great job bringing the fluff together with the mechanics.

[Forrestfire]

I'm currently working on a class called the Legendary Warrior... It's in a revised draft state and I'd love advice on it. I'd be happy to look at the class of anyone who feels like evaluating mine

[Averis Vol]

I'm currently working on a class called the Legendary Warrior... It's in a revised draft state and I'd love advice on it. I'd be happy to look at the class of anyone who feels like evaluating mine

I'm working on a near completely wis SAD frontliner with a large enough pool of utility abilities that he can function relatively well alone, and that melds better with a party behind him. Now, he still lacks a level 20 ability, and that is a large part of what I come to the homebrew forum to find help on. He is the Spirited Blade, and for a review of him, I'd be happy to look over your legendary warrior.

[Forrestfire]

Sure, I'd love to.

EDIT: Posted it in your thread. Hopefully it helps.

[Averis Vol]

Sure, I'd love to.

EDIT: Posted it in your thread. Hopefully it helps.

It did, thank you!

Also posted in yours, sorry there wasn't much, but your class is incredibly well balanced at T3.

[Forrestfire]

I'd be happy to look at other peoples' classes if anyone wants to trade a PEACH.

[AttilaTheGeek]

I'd be happy to look at other peoples' classes if anyone wants to trade a PEACH.

Critique written! I'd appreciate comments on my temporalist, please

[Forrestfire]

Thanks! I'll go through that tomorrow evening when I have some free time

EDIT: Posted my review of the class. Lovely flavor, neat abilities, absolutely terrifying exploits

[Legendxp]

I have a class that's not quite finished but I'm planning on incorporating some pretty cool at will abilities. Right now I need some suggestions as to custom feats, skill tricks, class features, and at-will abilities. I'm planning on it being similar to a warlock, except more melee based and closer to a bard. Here's the link.

Sorry couldn't help myself, here's the real link. Its also in my signature.

EDIT: I removed the spoiler, I don't think enough people noticed the second link.

[Rizban]

I'd like a review and some thoughts on my Shaman, please. Thank you.