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Thread: What's There Upstairs?
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2013-01-31, 11:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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What's There Upstairs?
Hello there!
I want to share with you my own comic called "What's There Upstairs?"
Description: Russian comic.
2145. Four races called "enkar" were created by people. They destroyed almost all the people on Earth, and themselves divided into several clans. Each clan is trying to survive.
Translation to English in progress.
Pleasant reading!
Read here and hereLast edited by Mabaya; 2013-02-05 at 05:07 AM.
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2013-01-31, 11:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: What's There Upstairs?
The art is beautiful, but there are a couple of problems I have with it.
The first is that a group of creatures that killed all the humans won't produce very sympathetic protagonists. The second is the way the comics are displayed. Call me a traditionalist, but I like seeing one comic at a time, preferably with a "next" button somewhere.
EDIT: or, if you really want to earn points with us, arrow key navigation.Last edited by Belisarius; 2013-02-01 at 02:47 PM.
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2013-02-01, 02:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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2013-02-04, 03:39 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: What's There Upstairs?
I'm sorry, but I can not do it on that site. In this case, you can read the comic here: http://wtucomic.smackjeeves.com/comi...137/chapter-i/ (no, this is not advertising or PR)
The "next" button there just in is :)
Thanks for the comment :3
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2013-02-04, 11:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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2013-02-05, 12:57 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: What's There Upstairs?
I assume you use Google Translate for your pages? The English gets the point across, but is a little broken and jarring for a natural speaker.
I'd be willing to clean it up a little for you, if you like."You want to see how a Human dies? at ramming speed."
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2013-02-05, 03:08 AM (ISO 8601)
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2013-02-05, 06:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: What's There Upstairs?
Alright. Check your PM box later today. I'll be going right off the English text and just making it easier to read. I'll throw in the Google translate back to Russian so you can double-check and ensure I haven't missed anything important.
I have finished the opening page. Let me know if it is easy to read. If not I can change how I format it.Last edited by Acanous; 2013-02-05 at 09:56 PM.
"You want to see how a Human dies? at ramming speed."