Ngilop's Critique exchange for homebrew.

[Rizban]

I'm always looking for input on R'E6...

[Mighty_Chicken]

I want my Ogre Changeling race PEACHed! I'll read your classes soon.

[Alabenson]

If anyone has an opportunity, could someone please give me some feedback on my Feyblessed class.

[ngilop]

Critque for Ogre changling here

Critique for teh Fey Blessed here

Here is my Dragon Shaman, if things seem a bit wierd, read my 2nd post that explains why i did what I did to the dragon shaman

[BelGareth]

I'll take a gander at some of these when I get the time, for the time being, a subscription of this thread.

[Grod_The_Giant]

I'll trade critiqe for critique on the new version of my Beastman. (Or at the very least, an answer to my question in the second post)

[ngilop]

critique for beastman here

[SillySymphonies]

I am going to critque the homebrew in a vacuum. When I critque I assume its only the PHB and the class itself. Unless other wise directed.

I am a null-optimizer. In that while i can do decent optimization (power attack>weapon focuz.. why is toughness even a feat?) I am nowhere near the abilityt hat most of the GiTP0ers are. Optimization is the last ( if i ever care about it anyways) think I am thinking of when I make a character.

Which makes you an ideal reviewer for the kind of game I tend to run. Kudos!

If you have the time, would you be so kind to review my fire archon base race? It's a LA 0 fire elemental, in the same vein as warforged (LA 0 constructs), shifters (LA 0 lycanthropes) and changelings (LA 0 doppelgangers).

If you like, I could review something similar brief of yours.

Thanks.

[Alabenson]

I've added a critique of the Beastman.

If anyone has an opportunity, I'd love some comments on my Templar clss.

[Grod_The_Giant]

I've added a critique of the Beastman.

If anyone has an opportunity, I'd love some comments on my Templar clss.

You scratched my back, so I've scratched yours.

[ngilop]

critique for Fire archon here

Critique for Templar here

[Fax Celestis]

Reviewed your hexblade. Can you review my wizard?

EDIT: also looked at Grod's Beastman, though I cant say I was really any help.

[ngilop]

Looked at your wizard Not gonna get infractioned for thread necro as now I am super leary about anything like that.. And I got the same opinion of it as I did the pathfinder advanced playtest.

Is this supposed to be a Wizard on crack and steroids? if so then you did a bang up job. I do like the 'eternal' spell.


I think this class only has a place if the PhB Wizard, PhB Sorcerer, warmage, dread necro, beguiler, and warlock are all replaced, Since you wizard does the same things but vastly in a superior way.

Its a class that I myself would never play. But I am just not a power player. So classes that I can tell are a bit too much out of the gate I steer away from, and I don't think there is a way to actually tone your wizard down.

[Fax Celestis]

I'm not sure how you think it's mechanically superior. It has a rather severely limited spell list. It doesn't get access to the global sor/wiz list like PHB wizards do: the only spells it gets are the ones provided by its mastery and mysteries.

[Jormengand]

Hmm... don't suppose you could do something with my Base Prestige classes, the Arcane Archer has already been done, but the Arcane Trickster would be nice.

I can do something in return, too.

[Ralcos]

Here's my class.
Any comments / tips / criticisms are accepted.

Spiritualist
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=333912

[Jormengand]

Here's my class.
Any comments / tips / criticisms are accepted.

Spiritualist
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=333912

I can get that if you could get mine?

[ngilop]

Arcane Trickster critquehere I like the idea behind it, but feel it needs some polishing.

Spritualist critique here

[Wargamer]

I would have liked to get some feedback on my Runecaster (link in sig). It's seriously old now though so posting may count as thread necromancy. :(

But for reference, it's intended to replace Wizards / Sorcerers in the setting it's used in.

Edit: I'm going to submit some Prestige Classes for it, so that'll justify (I hope!) any attempts people make to comment...

[ngilop]

GOt a new homebre class, this time i dipping my hand in pathfidner.

i did a marshal port over and I think ive done allright so far.. still missing a few abilities I think.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showt...re-tool-for-PF

[ben-zayb]

I'd appreciate some PEACHing for my Scout fix (sig below). Mechanically it should ideally be around (or a bit higher) the playing field as the ToB classes and Bard, except plenty higher in terms of archetypal scout roles of Perception and Stealth.

I'm not too familiar with PF, but if you have recent 3.5 projects I can do some PEACHing as well

[Gildedragon]

Ben: I posted some thoughts on the scout.

I am looking for critiques (or at least naming aid) for my magic-user generic spellcaster

[Ralcos]

I built another class and I want some criticism!

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showt...-Adept-(PEACH)

Hopefully it's good.

[MagnusExultatio]

I could definitely use some criticism/critique for my grappler.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showt...DnF-Conversion!

[Ralcos]

I revised my Adept class.
It now has a Table! Yay!

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showt...ed)-(3-5-PEACH)

[ngilop]

What up

I have a Fighter re-tool for pathfinder if anybody wants to take a look at it and give me some hints and suggestions.

[Cestes]

If you would be willing to, I would love for you to look at a Martial Initiator that I made a few days ago, It has passed my DM's balance check, for two campaigns, and I am somewhat proud of it... It uses the Akashic Magic rules, Path of War stuff, most notably the Radiant Dawn Discipline. There is a Playtest Version of the Radiant Dawn discipline available here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...7HeKumN4/edit#


My class is called the Celestial Adept: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets...it?usp=sharing

(I think something might have gone wrong with the hyperlink feature, here is the straight link: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets...it?usp=sharing )

Even if you never get around to looking at it, or decide that it isn't worth your time, thank you for considering it, and letting me share my brainchild here.

Hope you have a great day!

[Cestes]

I revised my Adept class.
It now has a Table! Yay!

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showt...ed)-(3-5-PEACH)

Heya, Ralcos! I reviewed your Adept, and I have to say, I loved it! I appreciate the amount of versatility that they gain through the class, and I've been looking for something like this, which allows me to dabble in a little bit of everything. I would suggest makin' the "Casting Points" a bit clearer, in both their usage, and their role in the class as a whole. I wish you the best in your endeavors with revising, and using the class, and I hope you will take the time to look at my class!

(Shamelessly inserting my homebrew for review)

The Celestial Adept